@schuyguy I agree. I feel like the author was in a rush to get the main story out and just wanted the reader to assume that Guk-hwa and her ex had a great relationship prior to the cheating, such as other characters commenting how they've been dating for almost four years (a sign of a serious, committed relationship) and sharing a credit card (also another sign). But that's sloppy because it doesn't give a solid foundation to the main conflict of this particular story arc. We're told as opposed to shown.
I think it would've helped to maybe show what happened before catching the ex-boyfriend in the act. Maybe establish what kind of relationship Guk-hwa and her ex had (i.e. were things getting rocky? Were they still close and in love? Was Guk-hwa maybe getting a weird feeling about his recent behavior?). They should've also recounted how the early and middle stages of their relationship was like (i.e. were they all lovey-dovey? Were they getting really serious? Serious enough to consider marriage?). We don't need a whole story arc; just a few flashbacks would be fine. And then have her catch him in the act.
And also, show how the ex-boyfriend acted around Jang Mi and show how Jang Mi met him. What were the circumstances like? Why did Jang Mi like him enough to flirt/go on a date with him? And then show Guk-hwa catching him in the act. And show Jang Mi's inner dialogue about it. Come to think of it, I don't think we're really shown her inner conflict about being--I hate using this term, but it's the best one I could come up with--a side chick. I think it would've made for interesting characterization and development if we were shown how she felt and thought about the whole situation.
I feel like doing something like that would make some of the main characters' actions make more sense and create some form of coherency and establish a solid foundation.
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