LOL I reread the first part of this yesterday, wondering if the second part would get translated... And today, here it is.

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Waited so long for this （≧∇≦)Finally!!(//∇//)\

Well, that ended better than I expected. I kind of expected her to get her heart broken, but it seems like Touko is pretty serious about her. A happy ending to a short, sweet story.

this was lovely and the artwork was so freakin' good.

Pretty good, Liked how it was done here more than in the previous yuri series by MARUTA.
Woulda liked more of this tho... but oh well.

I enjoyed this.

Minutoh posted:

I don't get it. Is Maruta notorious for turning yuri stories into het?

Bisexuals exist, yo.

Haha, yeah. In their defense though, maybe they're talking about the relationship in the story and the ending more than anything else. (something like yuri relationship for most of it then having a het relationship in the end)

I haven't read any of Maruta's het works (and I don't plan to either!), but, based on the comments in that other full yuri work, I think this is pretty much what happens in all of Maruta's stuff. Everyone was surprised that Nadeshiko Hiyori turned out to be full yuri (especially with that weird Papa thing... glad that got taken care of without any problems), and I guess I was too because of all the bad things I heard...

Also, Fate/Extra, huh? I still need to get around to reading the Fate VNs one day... although I don't believe they were ever officially released in America? And, well, even if they were, I certainly wouldn't have the money to pay for it based on how much stuff like Grisaia and Nurse Love Addiction are! (and, yeah, sorry for talking about this here, I don't want to derail the thread either).

One of Maruta's most popular series features a couple of incestuous fraternal twins, one of which has a penis. However, said person crossdresses and is oniichan-in-name-only. Even everyone at the school they go to thinks both of them are just identical cis girl twins. They tend to be hypersexual and enjoy having fun with other folks. The younger sister has sexual interaction with a nurse, both of them enjoy doing sexual stuff with a covertly-kinky librarian student, and everyone who interacts with them basically falls for them. However, they abruptly transfer schools leaving everyone hanging. The librarian, in love with the sisters, ends up clinging to the first guy who asks her out after the sisters disappear because she's incredibly lonely and depressed without them there.

There's Het, there's Yuri, there's Incest and Twincest, there's Student Teacher, there's Threesomes, a gender-ambiguous character, and more. It's a really confluence of everything.

Maruta's art seemed better than ever here. I think he had a little more restraint in showing all different crazy sex positions, which made things more grounded and the character's emotions were a little more prominent in the scene. I hope to see more of this Maruta.

And hear I thought that this will end with "leasbian orgy in the infirmary."

Well. All our speculations of how things would go wrong, or at least end in orgies and whatnot, and instead it's this really lovely, sweet, hot little sex scene. Very nice.

Not as shitty as I imagined it to be, given the author. That was a satisfying read, can't deny Maruta's art is pretty neat.

I'm pretty conflicted about this one. The art is really nice, the sex scene are hot, but the dialogues are lame.

"That's called 69, sempai"...

Way to get technical in the middle of lovemaking.

Messy af. Not bad but not the best. Nekomura still holds that title. It's judt not clean or romantic enough for my taste

The 69 part got me

I'm pretty conflicted about this one. The art is really nice, the sex scene are hot, but the dialogues are lame.

"That's called 69, sempai"...

Way to get technical in the middle of lovemaking.

They're teenagers doing it for the first time. Teenagers do and say dorky things.

I'm pretty conflicted about this one. The art is really nice, the sex scene are hot, but the dialogues are lame.

"That's called 69, sempai"...

Way to get technical in the middle of lovemaking.

They're teenagers doing it for the first time. Teenagers do and say dorky things.

I wonder if in the original she used the english term for it, which the other girl may not have heard before.

They're teenagers doing it for the first time. Teenagers do and say dorky things.

Yep. I mean, hell, think about the goofy faces we all make in the heat of the moment....

sleekie posted:

I'm pretty conflicted about this one. The art is really nice, the sex scene are hot, but the dialogues are lame.

"That's called 69, sempai"...

Way to get technical in the middle of lovemaking.

They're teenagers doing it for the first time. Teenagers do and say dorky things.

I don't think it's the effect the author was going for, though I may be mistaken.

It's just the hentai trope where the characters have to describe everything they do, feel and see. "You clit is so cute", "your dick is so huge", "I can smell your juices", "oh, we are doing a 69", "I can feel my insides burning", "your breasts are so soft", "oh no, you can't do that, it' dirty", "It's so embarassing..." etc, etc.

When they have sex, most people, or even teenagers, don't talk that much. They act and feel. Words can and should be used to communicate with your partner, but not in that kind of logorrhea.

It's obvious Maruta is a hentai artist. The dialogues are porn fillers, because only moans for 10 pages wouldn't sell.

But... I love the way he draws and both characters are cute in their own way. So I dunno. Less sex and more cuddling and feelings would have been nice.

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Story is very cliche, first sex scene came literally out of nowhere (I seriously thought that short haired girl was still imaging things while masturbating) but at least finally tomboyish character got laid. Weeee!~

I like this second part, a nice and sugar end <3

I think this was amazingly cute. It's pretty challenging to have your "first time" with a partner. (Holy shit so many of you guys are so biphobic it's not even funny.)

This was a great manga. I mean, LOL, I like lavender even more now~

Also. Not to be crude, but have you readers...seen enough sex or read about it?

When you're really into someone, you go all out. Of course it's gonna be messy, when you love someone you don't give a flying fuck about being technical because you want the person you're with to feel good.

Like, it's funny that many read yuri, think they know how two women do it, and then proceed to complain that it's not "enough" for them.

Sources: My own experiences. LMAO

sleekie posted:

I'm pretty conflicted about this one. The art is really nice, the sex scene are hot, but the dialogues are lame.

"That's called 69, sempai"...

Way to get technical in the middle of lovemaking.

They're teenagers doing it for the first time. Teenagers do and say dorky things.

I don't think it's the effect the author was going for, though I may be mistaken.

It's just the hentai trope where the characters have to describe everything they do, feel and see. "You clit is so cute", "your dick is so huge", "I can smell your juices", "oh, we are doing a 69", "I can feel my insides burning", "your breasts are so soft", "oh no, you can't do that, it' dirty", "It's so embarassing..." etc, etc.

When they have sex, most people, or even teenagers, don't talk that much. They act and feel. Words can and should be used to communicate with your partner, but not in that kind of logorrhea.

It's obvious Maruta is a hentai artist. The dialogues are porn fillers, because only moans for 10 pages wouldn't sell.

But... I love the way he draws and both characters are cute in their own way. So I dunno. Less sex and more cuddling and feelings would have been nice.

Exactly my thought. Noticing this was by Sir "Bait-and-Switch" Maruta I was extremely skeptical of this, but surprisingly it wasn't as bad as his other works. Unfortunately, even if you weren't aware of his previous works, this definitely gives off a cheap heterosexual "hentai" vibe (albeit, disregarding the first few pages of each chapter) solely due to the abhorrent dialogue. You honestly half-expect some dude to bulldoze himself in the infirmary and start fucking the girls left and right as he exclaims "deez lez pussi so tiht".

Although, I may be biased due to the fact that my standard for Lots of sex yuri is a bit higher in comparison to het smut. I started liking yuri in the first place due to the notion of it being the "purest form of love". Still, I'm not necessarily saying genuine het romance in sex-centered manga is impossible; it's just that in my experience it seems to be more uncommon or half-assedly thrown in for the sake of filler.

When I see artists such as Maruta apply their generic " SUPER!! fuckoo-festo doujin #69 " scheme to a potentially great short story such as this (nice art and sex scenes, interesting character designs), I'm always left disappointed.

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^Uh, wut?

^Uh, wut?

didn't even realize how much I rambled on. it's getting too late for this shit

tl;dr and less sloppy:
good art, good sex scenes but shit character interaction. I blame the implementation of bad hentai tropes for the downfall of this potentially great short story

basically what "Nya-chan" said but more aimlessly in my own words

^Uh, wut?

didn't even realize how much I rambled on. it's getting too late for this shit

tl;dr and less sloppy:
good art, good sex scenes but shit character interaction. I blame the implementation of bad hentai tropes for the downfall of this potentially great short story

basically what "Nya-chan" said but more aimlessly in my own words

Amen.