I still feel these releases could do with more proofreading/QC script wise.

As an example, "Were you that much into...when we did it?". There's a lot of sentences like this throughout.

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I still feel these releases could do with more proofreading/QC script wise.

As an example, "Were you that much into...when we did it?". There's a lot of sentences like this throughout.

At least they didn't get all philosophical like some of those Touhou doujins with interesting translations

It was pretty good, I wish she would have done it to Anna too

I love that whole last page.So matter-of-fact about it, and senpai really does seem taken with Anna in the end.

Was kinda confused on who was who during the first few pages where they both had clear hair.

and omg... this artist's art got a lot better.

last edited at Nov 25, 2016 9:17PM

Pretty sweet. Weird phrases here and there but the story itself was pretty nice. One night stands gone right
It was interesting to see her reject her male co-worker, not because she isn't into him (seems like they've slept together before) but because she actually wanted someone different. "Hm, on second thought, nah."

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I am thoroughly impressed! Great art, pretty cliche storyline but it still played out nicely. Overall, good read

This one put me on edge... I'm acrophobic as all hell! And they start flirting on the balcony at that damn height? Jesus Christ woman what if that balcony crumbled or some shit? Fuck my heart is beating hard

I still feel these releases could do with more proofreading/QC script wise.

As an example, "Were you that much into...when we did it?". There's a lot of sentences like this throughout.

That one gave me a bit of a pause as well, but then realised that I may have misinterpreted it. From the gesture she is making, it strikes me that what she is saying is "Were you that much into...", with the "..." being linked to her pointing at herself, "when we did it?"; so: "Where you that much into me when we did it"?

This is just after she confirmed that Anna did not merely see it as a casual fling, so she is reaffirming that Anna really was that much into her Senpai...

I still feel these releases could do with more proofreading/QC script wise.

As an example, "Were you that much into...when we did it?". There's a lot of sentences like this throughout.

That one gave me a bit of a pause as well, but then realised that I may have misinterpreted it. From the gesture she is making, it strikes me that what she is saying is "Were you that much into...", with the "..." being linked to her pointing at herself, "when we did it?"; so: "Where you that much into me when we did it"?

This is just after she confirmed that Anna did not merely see it as a casual fling, so she is reaffirming that Anna really was that much into her Senpai...

Ah, that would make sense. But I have to say, it wasn't the only instance throughout, so I do still stick by the feedback.

i like adult stories

Ahhh co-worker smut is the best to be honest. Much better than the typical high school setting that's ridiculously cliche.

Uhh soo sexy!!(//∇//)\ more please ‎( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

This one put me on edge... I'm acrophobic as all hell! And they start flirting on the balcony at that damn height? Jesus Christ woman what if that balcony crumbled or some shit? Fuck my heart is beating hard

When phobias sneak their way into perfectly innocent-seeming yuri... I feel you. T^T

Love Kitao Taki and love this doujin, just a shame that the translation really needs some work.

This doujin's great; although I agree that there were some phrases that were a bit odd.

I agree that the dialogue is a little unclear for the first half of it, even for such a simple story. But the sex was great. It reminded me of yui7 and Hiiragi Yutaka's sex scenes. Maybe it's just me, but I love pubic hair being part of the sensory experience conveyed in a sex scene.

Wow, it's nice to see the "Bisexual" tag not accompanied by its friends "Drama" and "Aaaaaangst"

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Not bad.

I don't get the first sentence in the author's afterword.

last edited at Nov 26, 2016 6:33AM

"And they all lived happily ever after"

Not bad.

I don't get the first sentence in the author's afterword.

Senpai was heterosexual as far as she knew, and was "passive" in her first lesbian experience. Then she obsessed over it and decided to actively pursue more sex, and then a full relationship, with Anna.

Kitao Taki really improved. I liked this.

I really like it a lot. Nice and fluffy :3

That was really nice. I liked the amount of detail on the final sex scene. Just enough to be tasty, not so much to be distracting. I mean, I do like my porn, but in stories like this I prefer it to be toned down a bit.

Really needs someone to clean up the translation. There wasn't a single sentence in that whole doujin that wasn't confusing.

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