And I'm the only one who felt this story was a little too by the book?
Young normal girl lives under oppressive parents, is seduced by mysterious transfer hunk of her life, love cannot be (it's a phase, both girls etc.), run off into the night together.
It's a odd mixture of fairy tale and yuri cliches. Kind of reminds of Simpsons episode "Lisa the Drama Queen" which parodies these fairy tale cliches by having a rich girl that is not understood by her parents and tries to run away with Lisa somewhere.
Come to think of it, yeah, it is pretty reminiscent of that episode.
Agreed, I found it hard to get into the actual yuri because there was nothing much to the characters or story.
Shame better one-shots can't be this long