Oh bloody hell... lol

On the bright side, I didn't know people actually read the credits!

last edited at Jun 25, 2016 9:52PM

Found a typo...in the credits. I don't think you spell support like "Suport".

Dammiiiiiiit

Diddy_Black posted:

I don't know why, but when Hinako fell asleep I thought that Hana was going to kiss her...

Me too. I wanted it to happen. I also felt that way after Hina chased after Hana when she was leaving.

Diddy_Black posted:

I don't know why, but when Hinako fell asleep I thought that Hana was going to kiss her...

Me too. I wanted it to happen. I also felt that way after Hina chased after Hana when she was leaving.

I'm with both of you, I was kind of bummed :)

last edited at Jun 25, 2016 11:19PM

I wonder if that best best friend will join the story on the next chapter?

Thanks for your hard work, guys!

It's quite proofread, but feel free to nitpick. I may cry though ;P

So um.. Can I? If you don't mind of course.
http://i.cubeupload.com/IPsaaA.png

And on one or two occasions you've separated the word 'suppose' as 'supp-ose'. It'd be better as 'sup-pose' tbh.

last edited at Jun 25, 2016 11:16PM

Thanks for your hard work, guys!

It's quite proofread, but feel free to nitpick. I may cry though ;P

So um.. Can I? If you don't mind of course.
http://i.cubeupload.com/IPsaaA.png

And on one or two occasions you've separated the word 'suppose' as 'supp-ose'. It'd be better as 'sup-pose' tbh.

Figures. Some of those were on purpose too...

Thanks for your hard work, guys!

It's quite proofread, but feel free to nitpick. I may cry though ;P

So um.. Can I? If you don't mind of course.
http://i.cubeupload.com/IPsaaA.png

And on one or two occasions you've separated the word 'suppose' as 'supp-ose'. It'd be better as 'sup-pose' tbh.

Figures. Some of those were on purpose too...

Purpose? :>
But uh, dw about it, it's easy to miss the small stuff TTvTT
I'm personally nervous rn, something I proofread came out too it seems, and I'm worried I fucked up somewhere

...The nice thing about translating, is that there's barely anyone to critique the quality of translation... ;D
Although I worked on the proofreading too...

last edited at Jun 25, 2016 11:46PM

I feel no shame, we delivered :)

Can I help next time? :<

I feel no shame, we delivered :)

Oh hell yeah you did

last edited at Jun 25, 2016 11:52PM

Any grammar nazi would help! :p
I'm terrible at proofreading, because I'm too used to terrible online grammar and spelling... =_="

last edited at Jun 25, 2016 11:56PM

pg 17, "I bet I'm the only one is school" should be "in school"

Diddy_Black posted:

I don't know why, but when Hinako fell asleep I thought that Hana was going to kiss her...

Me too. I wanted it to happen. I also felt that way after Hina chased after Hana when she was leaving.

I'm with both of you, I was kind of bummed :)

I'm so glad I'm not the only one who thought so.

pg 17, "I bet I'm the only one is school" should be "in school"

LMAO THAT'S GREAT
Same, Hana-chan, same, I'd bet so too :')

Any grammar nazi would help! :p
I'm terrible at proofreading, because I'm too used to terrible online grammar and spelling... =_="

Yeah, I'm up for some QA help :) Email us at kouyuri.contact@gmail.com, we'll bug you next time.

I don't know why, but when Hinako fell asleep I thought that Hana was going to kiss her...

Wouldn't that be because it's how it happened in Girl friends?

Well - the circumstances around it were different ofcourse but they were over at Akko's house and Akko fell asleep on her bed and Mari kissed her while she slept without thinking about it - which made her soon realise her feelings.

I'm glad Hana (the Mari of this story), didn't kiss her just then, because I wouldn't want it to be done the same way again - but I am looking forward to the first kiss too :)

last edited at Jun 26, 2016 12:23AM

hmmm I guess we might see this 'best friend' of hers come back, maybe she'll bring out Hana's realization

Typical Morinaga. Cuteness all around and a simple plot : Hana is slowly falling for Hina (who already fell for her). Probably at some point, the childhood friend will show up and will happen to be also in love with Hina. There'll be a bit of drama, jealousy and a happy ending with lots of tears.

I don't know why, but when Hinako fell asleep I thought that Hana was going to kiss her...

because GF ! why did it not happen :(

I don't know why, but when Hinako fell asleep I thought that Hana was going to kiss her...

because GF ! why did it not happen :(

Haha. I thought the same.

This mangaka always has this amazing balance of cute the gets me all doki-doki while reading ^_^
Sooo, I read thserialization for english, anyone know if the quality is good(like did the language end up butchered, or the print quality?) Because I definitely want to read the 2nd volume

Doing some giddy skipping :D Doing lots of giddy skipping :P Singing a cute song <3 Doing twirls and thinking how cute this chapter was <3<3

I don't know why, but when Hinako fell asleep I thought that Hana was going to kiss her...

Wouldn't that be because it's how it happened in Girl friends?

Well - the circumstances around it were different ofcourse but they were over at Akko's house and Akko fell asleep on her bed and Mari kissed her while she slept without thinking about it - which made her soon realise her feelings.

I'm glad Hana (the Mari of this story), didn't kiss her just then, because I wouldn't want it to be done the same way again - but I am looking forward to the first kiss too :)

Yeah that was definitely a big reason but i think i've seen this in other Yuri mangas, so that must be why it was assumed that she would kiss her.

I don't know why, but when Hinako fell asleep I thought that Hana was going to kiss her...

because GF ! why did it not happen :(

Haha. I thought the same.

Personally, I was hoping she wouldn't kiss her, exactly because it reminded me too much of GF and didn't want this one to be that similar to her previous work. So I'm happy it didn't go again for the "oh noes, I kissed my friend in her sleep !" route.