Ooo! What a dark twist! This was a fun read.

Eh, derpy "#1 fangirl" Tsubasa is more fun, but I guess this works too once in a while.

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Was I the only one who thought it telegraphed being creepy almost from the start?

Maybe but i can see that. Am I the only one who felt like it was twisted BDSM? (Dominance play)

I think Honoka is really there on her own free will, the collar is on her leg, it doesn't require a key, she could use her hands to unlesh herself if she wanted to. It's a creepy play though -_-

Locked doors and grilled windows, girl.

The chained leg is a probably a reminder considering how impulsive Honoka is. If she dare stare at a window, she can be seen

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I know something was amiss when I reached page 5. I really hope people dont glorified this kind of action. In fiction, it's interesting. But in reality, it's criminal. Thanks for sharing.

I yelled in the end... WHOA!!!!! OMG i had to read the last pages twice to understand what happened... Im SHOCKED

where are the locked doors and grilled windows? I noticed the manacle was a buckle, too. I think honoka is there voluntarily in some sense. then again, she isn't "our" Honoka, who would never under any circumstances "go missing" in such a cruel way.

The moment Honoka started crying I knew something's up. Couldn't even enjoy the nsfw part because I was too scared for the reveal of the truth. Turns out my fear was right. Even if Honoka was there on her own will it's still wrong that they wouldn't let their family know, I'd be worried dead if that was my friend

I just want a fluffy nsfw TsubaHono doujin yall, just a small one is good enough

The first-years seem to lend themselves for stories about possessiveness.

Here's to hoping that Emitsun is a in a better spot in real life than Honoka is in this doujin. Hang in there, Emitsun!

drpepperfan posted:

mfw tagging everything would ruin da twist

Bah.

Please add the yandere tag. Spoiler or not, you don't want people to be misled

Mm, I think that would srsly clash with what the artist intended though. Like, if I was working on a fandub of Citizen Kane, i wouldnt tag it "It's not a person, it was a sled" so people wouldn't get misled.

And yeah I just compared Citizen Kane to a Love Live porno. That's just how I roll.

What's the point of filters without proper tags? People blacklist rape and yandere for a reason, man...

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I think Honoka is really there on her own free will, the collar is on her leg, it doesn't require a key, she could use her hands to unlesh herself if she wanted to. It's a creepy play though -_-

Yeah that leg restraint literally has the same mechanism as a belt she could take it off whenever she wanted. This seems like just irresponsible D/S play rather than abduction and Stockholm Syndrome.

Was I the only one who thought it telegraphed being creepy almost from the start?

Nope. Tsubasa's eyes and demeanor were creepy from pretty much the first panel she appeared in. The lack of a yandere tag really isn't that misleading when you consider the art and storytelling itself screams it if you just listen for the warning bells.

I don't think honoka would be so irresponsible to leave school, not tell her family or friends, and hide out with Tsubasa for several days. Definitely seems like Tsubasa negatively influenced honoka (I'm also guessing Stockholm syndrome), so even though the strap on honoka's leg is removable, Tsubasa has some sort of lock on honoka's emotions. Not just some bdsm here.

If anyone has any other honokaxtsubasa sex doujins, please inform me, because this is the only one I've come across so far

If anyone has any other honokaxtsubasa sex doujins, please inform me, because this is the only one I've come across so far

If you don't mind them sharing, here's a 3P one involving Anju
http://exhentai.org/g/832586/b0c0f97469/

Well... Honoka looking kind of "fat" is ok... but this ending turns the whole story somewhat into crap for me...

didn't like the art, didn't like the plot..

just "meh"...

Ooo...I new something was up, but I wasn't expecting that!
But yeah the switch has been flipped, I need other d/s or bdsm love live pairings...I need 'em like yesterday! :p ^_^

Was I the only one who thought it telegraphed being creepy almost from the start?

Nope. Tsubasa's eyes and demeanor were creepy from pretty much the first panel she appeared in. The lack of a yandere tag really isn't that misleading when you consider the art and storytelling itself screams it if you just listen for the warning bells.

Going back to drpepperfan's comment about Citizen Kane, it would be like if the first hour of the movie was full of sled imagery, stamped with "Ros" and the rest obscured. It's not really that much of a secret that you can't get away with an appropriate tag.

In terms of twitsts, I'd give it a "nice try".

...
First i was like, Yash! Honoka x Tsubasa!
It was amezing
But then, A dark twist..
My lord, this became super sad & dark

my precious smol honks __(:'3 _/ L)L

drpepperfan posted:

mfw tagging everything would ruin da twist

Bah.

Please add the yandere tag. Spoiler or not, you don't want people to be misled

Mm, I think that would srsly clash with what the artist intended though. Like, if I was working on a fandub of Citizen Kane, i wouldnt tag it "It's not a person, it was a sled" so people wouldn't get misled.

And yeah I just compared Citizen Kane to a Love Live porno. That's just how I roll.

What's the point of filters without proper tags? People blacklist rape and yandere for a reason, man...

Yes please... add those tags, this was disturbing... for me

That was great...and the ending, at least for me, was like the cherry on top of this sundae.
Yes, I said that. Call me a twisted f*ck, sadistic, etc. But once in a while through all the fluffs and romance, we need a good twist in a good yuri.

Cover art is creepy

Yamori Misaki's Tsubasa x Honkers

Hmmm...what could possibly go wrong in this doujin?

Huh?? Isn't it ENOUGH Honoka loves Tsubasa back? WHY KEEPING her secretely at her place without anyone knowing?? O_O.... XD

Everything was going well but... The end ruined it :(

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Going back to drpepperfan's comment about Citizen Kane, it would be like if the first hour of the movie was full of sled imagery, stamped with "Ros" and the rest obscured. It's not really that much of a secret that you can't get away with an appropriate tag.

In terms of twitsts, I'd give it a "nice try".

Honestly from basically the first panel with Tsubasa, I found myself thinking "Something is very wrong with this picture. Her eyes are drawn way too creepily for this to be a normal NSFW doujin." When the big reveal at the end happened, rather than being surprised, I just thought, "So THAT'S what it was. I knew something was up!"

Correction: Not just her eyes. Basically her face in general. At times it looked uncannily like that of a sex offender leering at their target. At least, that's how it seemed to me...

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