The 'locked away for months' bit feels extreme and out of place. Avoiding the coffee shop because she was sorting out her feelings would be more grounded.
Ah,if only you knew what some people can do...those things do happen.
They do happen, but in fictional stories they can be silly depending on how they are presented. Being hit by a track is very common but it’s now a meme for isekai. I do agree that it feels extreme, she feeling shame because the 16yo she has the hots for saw her with her family would have been better. “A hit of reality” that made her ashamed.
I'm not disagreeing with you, but I always find it funny how depicting the accurate behavior of shitty men would be considered a caricature in fiction. Like, I write as a hobby, and sometimes I think about literally just writing in my/my wife/my friends' run ins with horrible men but then I think "nah, I need to give them some kind of complex motivation and backstory or people will think its too exaggerated."
Says a lot about society, I think.
The thing it says is the maid should stab the husband repeatedly by the way.
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