Just like that... Yikes
All the teasing and shipping

Damn, I hate every character in this.

Male characters in Yuri can sometimes be good friends and/or provide interesting narrative elements, but I dislike the inclusion of the guy here. Him discovering them at the end, a lot of the dialogue being about jealousy because one of the girls keeps looking at him, he feels weirdly central to the story for no good reason. Plus they knew he was outside, and it was so weirdly obvious to me that he'd discover them. If the girls were focused on each other and there was no guy here it would be a lot better in my opinion, anyways thanks for the translation!

Personally, I didn't feel it that way. I mean, the guy was just a pretext to lead to them getting off at school. We don't know if she was actually looking at him or, like she said, just spacing out.
But I share the fact that he not being there wouldn't change anything.

In another hands, I found it peculiar that Shino was so sure of herself about them not being found in the gym storage, like she already did something there before with someone else. And with Michiru's insecurities about Shino liking more dudes than her, I think Shino had already dated before, mostly or only men, and she fucked one of them in the gym storage before dating Michiru without being caught. And maybe, Michiru has never dated before, that's why she is so insecure.

I don't understand why everyone applause the dude.
It's not because he didn't behave like a dick that what he has done was marvelous.
He could have done so much better like don't try to fuck her even though she was the one asking for it. He knew she wasn't in her normal state. He knew she was a lesbian and heart broken.
It's not because there are awful dudes elsewhere that he is better.

It is indeed cute and wholesome but can u really count this as yuri? It seems to lean more toward subtlety than yuri. The characters are not in love, and there dont seem to be explicit sexual attraction between them.

Kiyoko Iwami drew a oneshot of 20 pages where a college girl gropes a high school girl's boobs and makes her let out a moan. Within an hour of meeting her for the first time. But sure, nothing gay happened here.

Her groping Kanata wasn't intended to make her moan or pleasure her. So yeah, nothing gay here.
The Yuri is misleading. I was expecting that Kanata rent Kiki to invite her at home and pretext something to show her breast and persuade Kiki to do the same or even more.

Instead we have a story about a high school girl who is insecure about her body and her first relationship and wanted a big sister to talk about it. That's it. No romantic feeling between the two of them, no coming-of-age story or discovering a new sexuality. It's still wholesome, but it's not Yuri (not in the romantic way). Kiki even says it at the end, they are FRIENDS.

We used the Gal Pal tag for the LoL but here it 's applies perfectly.

O.K...
I mean for a one shot, it feels uncompleted.

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Okay, this is sweet, fluffy, wholesome, etc.... But it's been 19 chapters, and they are just turning around each other. Yeah, yeah, they are more closer each chapter.
We get it; they are gay and in the closet. But this teasing is just so looooonnnng. I'm not asking for a sex scene, but to be more daring in their flirtation? maybe

OMG, fuck you!
First of all, she needs to talk to a psy. She's living only through the eyes of others.
And, the heck is with Ai. Ok, she found her other half but she decided to make her life so miserable by going anywhere without telling her and sending her some hints to try to find her. All that while still being married to a dude. Just Fuck you!
She's making everyone around her sad. She just sounds egoist for me.

She didn't get the older version, but she managed to get the younger one.....
Going out with the child of your childhood crush..... Ewww

Here comes the trouble, Miss Compensated Dating.

Oh please you can't end a chapter like that!

I'm surprised that no one point out that a grown ass woman is going out with an underage girl. But hey, it's yuri.

Everytime she wins. The cheating is absolute. With the luck she has, she can drop out school and get a ticket for any lottery. Or even try Casino.

Even the author don't know where we're going.... Holy Moly

Go see a psychologist girl, you really need one.

Karin, 16yo... Fuck no, you're shitting on us author. She looks like a 20 yo college girls at least. How can she wears those fancy clothes ? High heels, miniskirt, jewels... Did she comes from a party, a one night stand, her sugar daddy ?
16... It's unbelievable but maybe it's me...
But I'm pretty sure the author gives her this looks to make it less cringey and disgusting when she's next to Hiro's dad.

The fact that she has a crush on Hiro's dad don't bother me (we all had a crush on someone older than us when we were teenager) but he better not be one of those guys going for underage girls and also I hope the author will not depict a 16 yo as some seductress who's going to flirt, seduce and success to sleep with a 38 yo dude.
But looking at the clothes the author gives her, I think I already have my answer.

I'm putting aside that they all have a crush on someone base only on their looks, again they are teenager so it's comprehensible. And Hiro seeing Karin as some kind of exotic, unnatural creature just because she's pretty... Whatever.... I'm not sticking with this one.

I don't get the ending and even though it's an open one so whatever.
The only interrogation I have is why did she slap her ? She was already trying to kill herself, did she have to hit her ?

Iffy consent makes her looks like a cunt and lying to your crush to perceived if they are into you is stupid.

The story pacing is so, so slooooooowwwww!

Yeah there's a foiled rape attempt, but there's also you know actual rape.

That teacher raped her.

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First, fuck you groomer. They should report his ass to the other teachers and if they do nothing, post it on the internet.
Second, the author is horrible, ending the story when it's finally becoming interesting.

This is power harassment. Saitou got her the job, then started putting the moves on her with the implication that her position and advancement in the company were contingent on sexual favors. Luckily this wasn't entirely the reality, but still, I feel like if Saitou were a man everyone here would be calling them a creep...

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Pick-up artist off... Better change your approach

The heck !?

Yikes, reading it now, I see many red flags in that. Especially the "lesbian" couple.