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AgenderArcee
Clumsy Call discussion 06 Nov 20:24
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This is power harassment. Saitou got her the job, then started putting the moves on her with the implication that her position and advancement in the company were contingent on sexual favors. Luckily this wasn't entirely the reality, but still, I feel like if Saitou were a man everyone here would be calling them a creep...

Yeah I got totally turned off by this, constantly harassing your direct subordinate to date you is super messed up whether you're a man or a woman.

AgenderArcee
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This is the translator. Thank you all for reading. If anyone is having trouble understanding the gist of this one-shot, here is a list of key information.

  • The main character is Koma, not Yura. All depictions in the manga are implicitly made from her point of view.
  • The story spans one in-world year and follows a chronological order: High School 1st year summer (pg. 527 to 540); 1st year autumn (pg. 540 to 553); 1st year winter (pg. 553 to 560); 2nd year spring (pg. 561 & 562); 2nd year summer (pg. 563 to end.). It is easy to get swept away by the flow without appreciating how much isn't shown. Even if the seasons are of different length on paper, I think they should be considered on equal footing. Otherwise, you might get caught on a red herring.
  • Some sections have changed immensely from the other available translation. If you've read the previous version, comparing what was changed can help unearth more insight.
  • This is an incredibly dense and rather "technical" manga. Seemingly trivial lines of dialogue or set-plays are used to foreshadow future scenes or hint at more fundamental characterisations that are obscured by the rising emotional tides later in the story. Perhaps you might have missed something out?
  • There is character development, both negative and positive.
  • They are in love, but this is (not) a love story.

Also, as a titbit, some schools have enforceable regulations on innerwear. Some schools don't.

There are some stories that reveal more about the reader than the read. This is one of them. I hope you've enjoyed it. Maybe share it with your friends too!

Thank you for translating!

AgenderArcee
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The sea: Both a herald of change and Koma's feelings toward Yura which she won't admit, as they would break the normal. Not just her normal, but also the normal. This feels most evident in the scene with the girls from Yura' school, where Koma comes closest to actually doing something on Yura's behalf and "dirtying her hands", as the sea rises, and she wonders why she would even consider it when she doesn't want things to change.

Ooohh, I think I like that interpretation of the sea a whole lot more than my initial takeaway from the previous upload.

Would recommend forgetting the previous version and then reading this version with an open mind. It captures far more of the nuances that were originally present in the raw and would probably overturn every conclusion obtained from reading the first version. For example, this version is not tagged "tragedy".

I would still consider it tragic tbh, the suicide angle is maybe more ambiguous than it seemed before but I definitely don't think it can be written off entirely, and regardless Koma not crossing that threshold when Yura needed her to is itself tragic.

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LMAOO I GOT SO MAD AT THAT ALARM IT WOULDVE BEEN A PERFECT MOMENT.... excited to see what happens by the end of this trip though!!

AgenderArcee
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Loved this SO much I've reread it twice already lol. From the start I was naturally sideeyeing the idea of creating a sentient being just to love you and wondering if it would be handwaved, but of course we slowly see that this was intentional as Kei is revealed to be more selfish and irresponsible. Which is also why she would be foolish enough to discard Marie like that, since she sees her more as a means to an end than a person. The ending is great twisted karmic justice hehehe. And they lived happily ever after, the end. :)

Also on the subject of Kei being dumb enough to tell Marie that her love wasn't real, as she says she wanted to say goodbye, because she does feel sentimental attachment to Marie and their time together in a twisted way. She clearly just wasn't expecting her creation designed to love her to actually be capable of doing violence to her, though she also was going to remotely deactivate her anyway Marie was just faster. We know from early on that Kei is bad with people and it turns out that she's even bad with the person she made lol.

I feel like I didn't read the same comic as some of the people commenting here??

The reason her work is not accepted is outlined in the very first page. Kei is extremely uncharismatic and her work has huge ethical concerns. The latter part is what this entire comic is about. Granted her presentation didn't necessarily involve the romance code, but sentient customizable AI is pretty inherently rough territory.
She gives a breakup speech to a mere robot because she is human and did see Marie as a lover on some level. She questions herself after the fact why she didn't just cut that step out. It's not like the author just forgot she could do that.
I also really don't feel like the comic "suddenly got dark". The setup should be very unnerving if you think about it for even a second. The twist seemed pretty inevitable and like an appropriate exploration of the dynamic to me.

You’re absolutely right. But the visuals of that opening sequence immediately position the MC to arouse the sympathy of the reader—she’s young, wide-eyed, and under duress, while the people she’s talking to, at first unseen, are revealed to be a group of literally faceless bureaucrats who won’t even let her finish speaking. And the ethics concerns are not even first on the list of their objections.

So I agree that the setup should be unsettling if you think about its implications, but the way it’s presented seems to be designed for us to not think about that very much as we focus on learning who this MC is and what she’s about.

From what I know of this author’s other works, I suspect that discrepancy is intentionally part of the story’s narrative dynamic rather than an accidental double message. But it’s only a feeling of mine.

Yeah I think you're meant to see Kei as sympathetic at first but then slowly doubt that first impression as it goes on, until you then go back to read the first page again and are like "oh wait she isn't just awkward but well-meaning, she's actually a pretty horrible person" lol

AgenderArcee
Picnic discussion 13 Jul 23:16
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Very cute, but shouldn't it have the subtext tag? There's nothing really explicitly romantic here.

AgenderArcee
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Oh my god that was wild. Ending was a little abrupt though. But overall I loved it

AgenderArcee
It's You! discussion 06 Feb 17:45
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Cute haha

AgenderArcee
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I wonder why this translator fell so behind, I hope they haven't dropped it.

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Lez goooo

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Nice art but kind of odd, it does feel like something was missing! I feel like I only know what Yuiko dislikes about Mei, not what she likes about her, which makes it feel like she's just staying in the relationship because she's hoping Mei will change, which isn't a very good place to be. That would make for an interesting story, but then it just ends without exploring that. So it ends up feeling unfinished.

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I mean this in an entirely complimentary rather than critical way - holy shit, this did not need the supernatural element. The dialogue and characterization and expressiveness is so freaking good that even as somebody who rarely reads het romance, the hook provided by a gimmick was completely unnecessary because I was already completely captivated. This feels like it's in an entirely different class of quality than 95% of manga.

I was thinking that too haha! But we'll see how it goes, I already definitely believe in the characters' chemistry so hopefully it'll be interesting to see them navigate the gender/supernatural thing and not just a way to manufacture drama in an otherwise peaceful relationship.

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Just read everything there is and I'm surprised by how much hasn't happened yet? Well I'm curious enough to keep an eye on this series. The art isn't amazing but the setup is intriguing and I'm interested in seeing more of the pathetic lonely adult woman mc lol.

"I fell in love with a girl again" followed by a text from grandma. Love triangle with gramgram?

I think it's more that she feels guilty about being a lesbian when her family wants her to have a "normal" life and marriage.

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AgenderArcee
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Cute and sexy! I really like the glasses girl's look.

AgenderArcee
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When will Wagayuri return from the war....

AgenderArcee
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Very cute!

AgenderArcee
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SHIZUKU TELL HER NOW YOU DUMMY YOU DON'T KNOW HOW MUCH TIME YOU HAVE AAGHJSSJGFH

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Run, Nanase!!

AgenderArcee
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I'd love to see more especially if things get messy with different levels of feelings lol... this is from a while ago, was there every any more?

AgenderArcee
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Tsukasa is the NEET gamer lesbian fuckboy we never knew we needed.

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Mitsuki has such rizz

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And Fuuko adds sexual assault to her general stalking and manipulation! Luckily I'm here for the mess. Glad to see this series back, looking forward to continuing to feel gross in a perversely enjoyable way.

AgenderArcee
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Cute... maybe a little too fast? But I kind of like that Rurika is the straightforward type who sees what she wants and goes for it.

AgenderArcee
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This looks promising...