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Dark_Tzitzimine
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joined Dec 18, 2013

I think she's aiming to take everyone down. Sort of "if I can't be happy, no one else can"

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joined May 7, 2014

Damn...

risingstar3110
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joined Feb 15, 2013

Honestly... i kinda want to see more of this.

I means a kouhai, supposedly innocent girl like Moe turned out to be huge genius sadist that can go around dominating girls left and right. She's kinda... i don't know...quite cool?

Whatever ending it is, i hope Moe don't give up on her talent through. I means not many people could observe people weakness, liberate them form social fear, then turn it to pleasure the way she do. As long as she learn how to keep a certain limit, safe words and all, as at this moment she seemed to just do whatever she want

last edited at Jun 22, 2015 4:56AM

I'm curious to see how this turns out, after they took pictures and tied the dorm mother and ran-sempai up.

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joined Sep 14, 2014

I really love this rejection and drama between Moe and Ran. "I love senpai > Senpai rejects me > Might as well dom everyone else > Senpai now wants me > Screw Senpai's feelings, she hurt me first > Let's put an end to this

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joined Apr 9, 2015

This series sure took a turn (and has become very messy). It's hard to believe this is the same girl from the first chapter.

Seolaposescolor2
joined Nov 9, 2014

I really love this rejection and drama between Moe and Ran. "I love senpai > Senpai rejects me > Might as well dom everyone else > Senpai now wants me > Screw Senpai's feelings, she hurt me first > Let's put an end to this

Great summary. I approve this message. :)

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joined May 24, 2015

dont know how i feel. i like but not i feel like its tearing me apart

ChocolateCakeLover
Gigi7
joined Feb 4, 2015

Moe is so deliciously evil.

Literally can't read this without imperial march in the background.

Roomfortwo
joined Feb 11, 2014

So it wasn't ending the whole basement thing but just ending the dorm mother's way of doing things, uh ?

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joined Mar 1, 2015

I have nothing against the ending but why did Ran cut her hair.. I really hate it when long haired girls cut their hair short..

joined Sep 15, 2013

I really hate it when long haired girls cut their hair short..

Well its easier to handle in summer, also as weird as it sounds, shorter hair makes people think you are more professional, I don't even know how to explain that, last summer I thought this was a one off thing during my internship, this summer during the interviews and stuff, turns out no, its a pretty common occurrence, its like the weirdest thing that I thought people would be judged on.

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joined Jun 12, 2015

And that's the end of Corruption’s Finale. Well, what can I say? It was ok, I guess? I liked how Moe's corruption was done but the rest of the story is lacking and BDSM/orgy theme wasn't that good. Compering this to other Mira's work like "The Sea, You, and the Sun" or "Earth Girls", this is the weakest.

last edited at Jul 17, 2015 1:59PM

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joined Sep 14, 2014

And that's the end of Corruption’s Finale. Well, what can I say? It was ok, I guess? I liked how Moe's corruption was done but the rest of the story is lacking and BDSM/orgy theme wasn't that good. Compering this to other Mira's work like "The Sea, You, and the Sun" or "Earth Girls", this is the weakest.

I think this story was supposed to be more towards lust and angst that developed in this stereotypical prestigious school of girls, hence the word "corruption" in the title.

Roomfortwo
joined Feb 11, 2014

I have nothing against the ending but why did Ran cut her hair.. I really hate it when long haired girls cut their hair short..

Hey, at least Moe's chest didn't suddenly got gigantic to show that she was now an "adult" XD

joined Apr 10, 2014

Honestly... i kinda want to see more of this.

I means a kouhai, supposedly innocent girl like Moe turned out to be huge genius sadist that can go around dominating girls left and right. She's kinda... i don't know...quite cool?

Whatever ending it is, i hope Moe don't give up on her talent through. I means not many people could observe people weakness, liberate them form social fear, then turn it to pleasure the way she do. As long as she learn how to keep a certain limit, safe words and all, as at this moment she seemed to just do whatever she want

Moe don't need no safe words!!

Safe words are for squares!!

Girls leak left and right when her whip cracks, and she understands carrot and the whip concept quite well.

Another fine work by Mira again, though the ending is bit weak...

1461894977557
joined Jun 12, 2015

And that's the end of Corruption’s Finale. Well, what can I say? It was ok, I guess? I liked how Moe's corruption was done but the rest of the story is lacking and BDSM/orgy theme wasn't that good. Compering this to other Mira's work like "The Sea, You, and the Sun" or "Earth Girls", this is the weakest.

I think this story was supposed to be more towards lust and angst that developed in this stereotypical prestigious school of girls, hence the word "corruption" in the title.

Even so, it could be done better.

Cs4_cover
joined Jul 13, 2015

Try put emotions on Moe in the last chapter was kinda forced because her personality was change in favor to be hardcore and then comeback to be emotional to point to cry or react when a girl say ''I love you'' is not convince
But I think is that what we get in a orgy scenary

1461894977557
joined Jun 12, 2015

Try put emotions on Moe in the last chapter was kinda forced because her personality was change in favor to be hardcore and then comeback to be emotional to point to cry or react when a girl say ''I love you'' is not convince
But I think is that what we get in a orgy scenary

Mugino, is that /u/?

last edited at Jul 17, 2015 2:40PM

Nezchan Moderator
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joined Jun 28, 2012

Try put emotions on Moe in the last chapter was kinda forced because her personality was change in favor to be hardcore and then comeback to be emotional to point to cry or react when a girl say ''I love you'' is not convince
But I think is that what we get in a orgy scenary

Given she became emotionless because she thought that specific girl would never love her, I can imagine it would be a shock to Moe to hear that she actually did. It makes sense that she'd be shaken out of her depression and start showing emotion again.

Personally I think this was Mira's strongest multi-chapter story, above Earth Girls and Sun, Sea and You.

Billportrait
joined Jan 17, 2014

Moe's become so cool, she is making her gloves disappear at page 81 for one panel

Also, what Nez said

Transformation was still too fast, I wanted the yuri equivalent of Walter White

last edited at Jul 17, 2015 3:21PM

Nevri Uploader
Rosmontis
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joined Jun 5, 2015

I thought ending was fine. Everything was solved and Moe got her happy ending with senpai. I really enjoyed look into the future.

Bdsm setting wasn't bad idea, but it was way too tame (kinda like 50 shades movie, most hardcore thing was whipping hard, oh noes!). I guess girls from prestigious schools aren't stressed that much ;P

Story was interesting overall and I liked how Moe's character progressed.

Also what Nezchan said. It was perfectly in Moe's character to revert after hearing that Senpai loves her.

Nezchan Moderator
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joined Jun 28, 2012

Moe's become so cool, she is making her gloves disappear at page 81 for one panel

Ah, the Sephiroth gambit.

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joined Dec 16, 2013

Bdsm setting wasn't bad idea, but it was way too tame (kinda like 50 shades movie, most hardcore thing was whipping hard, oh noes!). I guess girls from prestigious schools aren't stressed that much ;P

not hardcore enough?
here http://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/hop_skip_crazy

last edited at Jul 17, 2015 4:36PM

Nevri Uploader
Rosmontis
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joined Jun 5, 2015

Bdsm setting wasn't bad idea, but it was way too tame (kinda like 50 shades movie, most hardcore thing was whipping hard, oh noes!). I guess girls from prestigious schools aren't stressed that much ;P

not hardcore enough?
here http://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/hop_skip_crazy

On the other hand John K. Peta is too hardcore xD And I don't really like so unrealistic porn ;P

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