God I love translation explanations!!!! Love seeing the choices here; I'm definitely following the tone shifts, so it's absolutely doing it's job!
Also, though I am a certified lesbian, I am excited to see haruyo's cool older brother make an appearance so soon. I saw a pic of him on the artist's socials and was like "ooooooh he's got a GOOD design" (their whole whole family dynamic is adorable too omg)