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joined May 3, 2014

garbage pitty story, didn’t make me sympathize with her for choosing to spread her legs to an ADULT TEACHER ! while underage, WITH A WIFE! LOL

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joined Jan 3, 2022

garbage pitty story, didn’t make me sympathize with her for choosing to spread her legs to an ADULT TEACHER ! while underage, WITH A WIFE! LOL

She’s a minor….

It’s the ADULT TEACHER who chose to cheat and chose to take advantage of his authority over and sleep with her.

Minors can’t consent bro

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joined Jan 3, 2022

I feel like I’ve seen plenty of stories like this, but I still liked it cuz of the sweet ending

That teacher should be reported tho

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joined Mar 9, 2024

Mixed feelings...

That teacher should definitely be reported though. Sex with a minor is definitely a BIG NO. No excuses.

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joined Jan 11, 2014

garbage pitty story, didn’t make me sympathize with her for choosing to spread her legs to an ADULT TEACHER ! while underage, WITH A WIFE! LOL

Blaming a 16 year old for being taken advantage of by an "ADULT TEACHER" because she's young and in a vulnerable state of emotion due to her family neglect is wild. That pedo teacher needs to go to jail.

joined Jul 20, 2023

I lost count how many times I have read this same formula but good for them!

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joined Sep 4, 2021

aww glad she escaped that shitty teacher and that crazy guy ouh….

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joined Mar 27, 2018

garbage pitty story, didn’t make me sympathize with her for choosing to spread her legs to an ADULT TEACHER ! while underage, WITH A WIFE! LOL

Gross.

You, I mean. Not her.

Capture
joined Aug 12, 2021

Definitely nowhere near as bad as I expected given the tags, but I can see a hopeful ending here where our protag finally finds someone willing to stay with her without exploiting her for sex.

And in that sense I do agree someone should kill that teacher for having a student come to him with real problems and reacting to it by exploiting his power over her like this.

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Sono.hanabira.ni.kuchizuke.o.-.atelier.no.koibito-tachi.full.1462399_avartar
joined May 28, 2015

First, fuck you groomer. They should report his ass to the other teachers and if they do nothing, post it on the internet.
Second, the author is horrible, ending the story when it's finally becoming interesting.

thechampionmike95
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joined Aug 6, 2015

Maybe I've missed something but this didn't feel like a yuri story. There was no indication she loved her friend in a romantic way. She just said she feels safe with her around all the toxic men in her life. Maybe it could've become yuri but what we were given doesn't suggest it ends with them together.

Ykn1
joined Dec 20, 2018

Good. Could use a bit more of the two together at the end, though, or a sequel.

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joined Sep 10, 2022

Maybe I've missed something but this didn't feel like a yuri story. There was no indication she loved her friend in a romantic way. She just said she feels safe with her around all the toxic men in her life. Maybe it could've become yuri but what we were given doesn't suggest it ends with them together.

I have the same feeling and feel similarly about calling her Bi. I don't see much there. It's a sweet ending, though, and I can assume the author maybe meant it as yuri. It's not "on the page," though, while as always the het stuff doesn't suffer from the same use of subtly. The other one shot from this author was also "light" but at least had them living together in the end. Still, it was enjoyable.

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thechampionmike95
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joined Aug 6, 2015

Maybe I've missed something but this didn't feel like a yuri story. There was no indication she loved her friend in a romantic way. She just said she feels safe with her around all the toxic men in her life. Maybe it could've become yuri but what we were given doesn't suggest it ends with them together.

I have the same feeling, and I feel the same way about calling her Bi. I don't see much there. It's a sweet story, though and I can assume the author must have meant it as yuri but it's not there on the page, while her het stuff is certainly all over the place..

Exactly. It gives more of a "when you're down and in trouble it's good to depend on those who care for you" kind of vibe. Suggesting she should date her friend just because she was the only one she had a good relationship, despite not having any feelings for her prior, wouldn't be something I suggest someone should do.

joined Mar 4, 2017

Yeah there's a foiled rape attempt, but there's also you know actual rape.

That teacher raped her.

543633_50
joined Sep 10, 2022

Maybe I've missed something but this didn't feel like a yuri story. There was no indication she loved her friend in a romantic way. She just said she feels safe with her around all the toxic men in her life. Maybe it could've become yuri but what we were given doesn't suggest it ends with them together.

I have the same feeling, and I feel the same way about calling her Bi. I don't see much there. It's a sweet story, though and I can assume the author must have meant it as yuri but it's not there on the page, while her het stuff is certainly all over the place..

Exactly. It gives more of a "when you're down and in trouble it's good to depend on those who care for you" kind of vibe. Suggesting she should date her friend just because she was the only one she had a good relationship, despite not having any feelings for her prior, wouldn't be something I suggest someone should do.

I would have normally said maybe we're assuming their sexualities based on the author's history but this author has written a lot of Het and that also goes for their currently running series. So, it's mixed. I think at best the author is using an old-school version of yuri (girls interacting, not necessarily romantic, subtlety, ambiguity, etc.). Anything else is not really in the story itself. Interesting read anyway.

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joined Apr 25, 2020

garbage pitty story, didn’t make me sympathize with her for choosing to spread her legs to an ADULT TEACHER ! while underage, WITH A WIFE! LOL

do you even know what grooming is? this guy should be banned forever from this site

Sorawoavsleep2
joined May 11, 2024

garbage pitty story, didn’t make me sympathize with her for choosing to spread her legs to an ADULT TEACHER ! while underage, WITH A WIFE! LOL

happy new year

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joined Oct 8, 2010

We will not be allowing for blaming the minor in grooming situations. I am hoping this month ban will aid in helping you realize how minors can't consent with adults XadarxBlack.

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joined Jul 21, 2024

The ending wasn't bad. A sequel could make the story a bit better by shining more light on the two girls.
Also Of course, he's an art teacher. I remember reading a similar story where the art teacher also took advantage of the student council president, and she mistook it for love. Even after he was fired, he continued his illicit relationship with her. I can't recall the title, and honestly, I don’t want to, it wasn’t a good story.

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Sono.hanabira.ni.kuchizuke.o.-.atelier.no.koibito-tachi.full.1462399_avartar
joined May 28, 2015

Yeah there's a foiled rape attempt, but there's also you know actual rape.

That teacher raped her.

True

Fennec
joined May 28, 2012

What a way to start new year.
Not bad.

joined Apr 16, 2022

An interesting oneshot. I do kind of feel the author was trying to do a bit too much given the page count. With all the plot there wasn't really enough time to delve into the protagonist's mindset so it was hard to get a real good view of her as a character. I think it would've been significantly better if it were at least half again as long, and maybe combine the rapist character with the teacher. Still, I do appreciate the author trying to tackle complex topics and I did enjoy it overall.

Also, this is absolutely yuri; these faces aren't faces of platonic love lol.

I would have normally said maybe we're assuming their sexualities based on the author's history but this author has written a lot of Het and that also goes for their currently running series. So, it's mixed. I think at best the author is using an old-school version of yuri (girls interacting, not necessarily romantic, subtlety, ambiguity, etc.). Anything else is not really in the story itself. Interesting read anyway.

The author's only in charge of the art for their currently running series so I wouldn't draw any conclusions from that. They've also posted plenty of yuri manga on their twitter. So I think going by the author's history too it's safe to call this oneshot yuri.

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joined Apr 19, 2018

I felt like the dialogues were disjointed or purposely so vague that it became hard to follow what was even being said or monologued.

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joined Apr 19, 2018

Also, this is absolutely yuri; these faces aren't faces of platonic love lol.

Honestly that just sounds like a skillissue on your part. Me and homies all look at each other like that 24/7 fr fr

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