uh. excuse me? is future!elsa getting involved again or....?

don't think that's future!elsa. Different cloak, hair and eye color look different too. And Elsa is not a demon

"there's too much loli fluff", they said. "not enough plot", they said.

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I hope the people complained that there was too much fluff are happy now.

Geez, you get butthhurt people no matter what you say on these forums.
Yes, the people who were reading the story for the plot are glad the plot has come back and stopped middling around doing nothing.
Happy with that response?

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Dang, demon nun(?) is a kill stealer! That was supposed to be Evie's!

That seemed kind of silly. What Duke would be in a room alone with someone he knew was both a demon and was a person he had screwed over?

Not really
Not talking alone with that demon = death
Deceiving that demon = death
So his best chance was telling the truth and promise a better deal for the demon. His mistake was (I guess) mentioning the heart extract

What a lovely sweet optimistic world. Where if orphans are in trouble, they'll get rescued not just by one random miraculous benefactor, but two competing ones! And high status villains victimizing the orphans avoid the comeuppance headed their way from one of the rescuers only by getting slain by the other one!

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Oh no.
That new demon guy seems like very bad news . . . .

I think this demon is likely the nun who eventually ends up running the orphanage, or perhaps a new character related to the attack going on in the future. I'm looking forward to getting back to plot progression.

himedanshi lol

When you mess with time travel, time tends to mess back. Whatever she did to the timeline is snapping back hard! Good thing she got all the licks she could handle, before the crap hit the fan.

Let me simply state for the record that while I won’t mind whenever the story gets around to progressing the plot, as long as we’re getting scenes like little cutie Elsa wandering around in her little slippers, I’m fine with it.

Elsa finally meets her mother-in-law (future)! Mom approves of this courtship and next I expect we'll see either Elsa getting set on the path that eventually leads to her time loop or Evie treating with a demon.

Cute and ominous chapter, I like it.

Cute. ^_^

On ya Evie's mum, she ships em too!

How is it even possible that Elsa never learns her name? Someone has to menton Evies name eventually.

Beautiful woman <3

credits page

Yeah, Elsa, don't act brand new! ...oh wait, you are brand new in this timeline, you sweet summer child. >__>

Elsa low-key getting Mama's approval.( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

that jpeg of a carpet on page (strip?) 3 was very noticeable lmao

that jpeg of a carpet on page (strip?) 3 was very noticeable lmao

it's the past, they just didn't have high res carpets back in the day when they were kids :D

So the mother's mentor was this saint. The mother's background is even more interesting now. Interested to know how she got her curse and if it was directly related to her mentor.

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How is it even possible that Elsa never learns her name? Someone has to menton Evies name eventually.

At this point, we just have to suspend our disbelief for it. The author is committed to the bit, so we'll just have to accept that as the story progressed, it ended up that they spent some extended time together in the past, and whoops, that didn't go with Elsa not knowing Yvonne's name. Gotta write around that, but what can you do, it's just a problem of episodic writing.

How is it even possible that Elsa never learns her name? Someone has to menton Evies name eventually.

At this point, we just have to suspend our disbelief for it. The author is committed to the bit, so we'll just have to accept that as the story progressed, it ended up that they spent some extended time together in the past, and whoops, that didn't go with Elsa not knowing Yvonne's name. Gotta write around that, but what can you do, it's just a problem of episodic writing.

Honestly I like it a lot, there's just something quietly hilarious about Elsa not knowing Yvonne's name. At the start it could still be assumed that they only met briefly but the longer they're together the more and more of a Rube Goldberg machine of "oh yeah I gues despite having lived in her house and gotten to know her family and noble standing I never managed to catch the required information to actually be able to infer who exactly she is" this becomes.

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I get the feeling Evie is going to parley with the demons.

What I really want to know is if there's a way to save mom, though. She's delightful.

Let me simply state for the record that while I won’t mind whenever the story gets around to progressing the plot, as long as we’re getting scenes like little cutie Elsa wandering around in her little slippers, I’m fine with it.

You have a point.

Future mother in law approves. ^_^