The issue isn't that it has crazy over the top sex stuff in it. The issue is that it started as a pretty tame smut with likeable characters in relationship. Sure the story wasn't too complex or anything, but it still made sense. But the further it went on, the more new chapters started to deviate from that initial premise more and more and ended up completely forsaking what the series was at first and turned into something completely different. Maybe that was authors intention from the start. Maybe author got bored of initial characters and premise and decided to spice thing up and ended up writing about whatever the hell they felt like. Maybe they simply didn't give a fuck if it all made sense or not from the start. But you can't fault people for complaining about the story, because they felt mislead by first chapters what this series is supposed to be about. If you still enjoy it and don't mind that characters just fuck each other without rhyme and reason, because it's just porn, there's nothing wrong with that, but you can't just ignore that it wasn't like that at first and act as if opinions of people who voice their criticism now, because they liked first chapters, are invalid. It's fine to like it, but it's also fine to acknowledge faults in it. Those two things aren't mutually exclusive.
My thoughts exactly, and this chapter is a great example of it as I mentioned above. The story just plain lacks any sense of cohesion.
How the hell is a little kid allowed in a damn love hotel? That cannot be allowed in real life... at least I hope it ain't. I guess worrying about the story in a thing like this ain't a good idea though haha.
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Of all the latest chapters i decide to randomly try reading to see if this actually went anywhere decent, I choose the one that has rape slipped into the tags...
She licked her pussy for 4 hours straight!? and that made her come a little only ONCE AFTER 4 HOURS? And her friend has indeed a lot of patience for not going mad after 4 hours of that.
