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Why is blondie not named yet. Ren keeps calling her "this girl." Is she not your friend??

joined Mar 19, 2019

Why is blondie not named yet. Ren keeps calling her "this girl." Is she not your friend??

Funny you should say that

butches-and-chicken
Cachorra
joined Jun 12, 2023

This time I felt genuinely sad for Ren.

Itsuki! A good name.

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joined Jul 29, 2017

Re: the TL note: no mention of why the translator would avoid the standard localization of the shishi-odoshi.

https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/TheThingThatGoesDoink

UraYukimitsu
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joined May 21, 2023

Re: the TL note: no mention of why the translator would avoid the standard localization of the shishi-odoshi.

https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/TheThingThatGoesDoink

I've never seen the shishi-odoshi sound being localized as "doink" before so I'm not sure how standard it really is and how clear it would have been to the readers. I just went for a bath-related sound that could easily be extended with a ー.

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joined Jun 21, 2021

Re: the TL note: no mention of why the translator would avoid the standard localization of the shishi-odoshi.

https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/TheThingThatGoesDoink

I've never seen the shishi-odoshi sound being localized as "doink" before so I'm not sure how standard it really is and how clear it would have been to the readers. I just went for a bath-related sound that could easily be extended with a ー.

I believe they maybe, possibly, potentially, have been joking~ Can't say for sure though

last edited at May 10, 2025 2:44PM

UraYukimitsu
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joined May 21, 2023

Re: the TL note: no mention of why the translator would avoid the standard localization of the shishi-odoshi.

https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/TheThingThatGoesDoink

I've never seen the shishi-odoshi sound being localized as "doink" before so I'm not sure how standard it really is and how clear it would have been to the readers. I just went for a bath-related sound that could easily be extended with a ー.

I believe they maybe, possibly, potentially, have been joking~ Can't say for sure though

I'm already bad at telling when someone is joking in person let alone over text

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joined Jul 29, 2017

Re: the TL note: no mention of why the translator would avoid the standard localization of the shishi-odoshi.

https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/TheThingThatGoesDoink

I've never seen the shishi-odoshi sound being localized as "doink" before so I'm not sure how standard it really is and how clear it would have been to the readers. I just went for a bath-related sound that could easily be extended with a ー.

I believe they maybe, possibly, potentially, have been joking~ Can't say for sure though

I'm already bad at telling when someone is joking in person let alone over text

I swear the only times I’ve ever seen it that sfx has been “doink.” Not sure which manga offhand, though. It was kind of memorable because I had no idea such things existed until I started reading manga.

last edited at May 10, 2025 3:30PM

Ykn1
joined Dec 20, 2018

I'm pretty sure that invitation had actually nothing to do with her textbook.

joined Jan 14, 2020

I know the Trope, but I'm not sure I've ever actually seen 'doink' anywhere outside of Tropes.

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Blastaar posted:

Re: the TL note: no mention of why the translator would avoid the standard localization of the shishi-odoshi.

https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/TheThingThatGoesDoink

I've never seen the shishi-odoshi sound being localized as "doink" before so I'm not sure how standard it really is and how clear it would have been to the readers. I just went for a bath-related sound that could easily be extended with a ー.

I believe they maybe, possibly, potentially, have been joking~ Can't say for sure though

I'm already bad at telling when someone is joking in person let alone over text

I swear the only times I’ve ever seen it that sfx has been “doink.” Not sure which manga offhand, though. It was kind of memorable because I had no idea such things existed until I started reading manga.

I just listened to one on youtube and I can't say "doink" feels like a particularly good representation of the sound.

Also, I appreciate the translation note for both context and some insight into how the translation process works. Thank you for including it.

last edited at May 10, 2025 9:43PM

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joined Aug 4, 2021

stayed over? stayed the night??

last edited at May 11, 2025 3:14AM

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joined Jul 21, 2024

stayed over? stayed the night??

Spent the night, used her bathtub, and maybe even shared a bed and pajamas. ;)

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joined Jul 29, 2024

yesss we're making some progress, she took the initiative to invite the taller girl on her own

Leaping%20cow
joined Sep 27, 2017

stayed over? stayed the night??

Spent the night, used her bathtub, and maybe even shared a bed and pajamas. ;)

Maybe even a little spooning happened lol

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joined Feb 14, 2016

I just listened to one on youtube and I can't say "doink" feels like a particularly good representation of the sound.

Also, I appreciate the translation note for both context and some insight into how the translation process works. Thank you for including it.

I think of it much more like a tap, or, if I may be a bit presumptuous, even a clack

last edited at May 12, 2025 12:29AM

Chimera
joined Aug 2, 2023

To give my own two cents on the translation: I can't but associate "doink" as a particulary funny euphemism for sex (I blame Zach Weinersmith) ,so I very much appreciate the sploosh, which alignes pleasingly to the authorial intent.

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joined Mar 4, 2018

I'm pretty sure that invitation had actually nothing to do with her textbook.

Probably not, but let's hope there's still some learning.

Roodypatooti
Roody
joined Feb 11, 2022

Yeah she's all yours now. Just a matter of time at this point.

Leaping%20cow
joined Sep 27, 2017

That's the blush and look of a girl that's fallen in love but hasn't realized it yet

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Cachorra
joined Jun 12, 2023

Ohohohoho, she's starting to fall in love...

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joined Jul 29, 2024

yep she's definitely falling in love

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joined Jul 21, 2024

Oh my god just date already, why are they so cute together ^_^

Astraea Hill
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joined Aug 17, 2012

Why is blondie not named yet. Ren keeps calling her "this girl." Is she not your friend??

Her name is Itsuki.

Chapter 7 page 3 bottom panel Rei calls out to her with her name before carrying on, on page 4, with asking Itsuki to "come over for a bit".

Chapter 8 page 3 bottom panel, on the phone the post of the toffee apples (?) says "with Itsuki"

[Edit: To be fair Itsuki does say, at Chapter 7 page 4, bottom panel that triggered the whole "sploosh/kapoon" discussion, "It's been a while since she called me by name"]

last edited at May 18, 2025 1:24PM

Ykn1
joined Dec 20, 2018

Good job.

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