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joined Jan 17, 2019

Thank you, scanlation team! I can only assume that it was a very lot of work, so really appreciate it.

As for Aoi - for me she was very interesting character, don’t know if because of being well-written or her charisma / player traits, but I really think she adds a whole lot to the story, not only as mere plot device. I was interested in what will happen to her, what was her motivation and circumstances - similarly to being interested in both Kazuki and Kae. So for me putting her in more chapters was a good idea.

And it would be even better if Louko had more screentime! But still am grateful for what I got ;)

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joined Jun 21, 2021

I get why many ppl find Aoi polarizing but I personally really like her as a character. And she really didn't do anything actively bad, most of it was just things not working out for her either bc she got focused on the wrong thing or bc she self-sabotaged.
Her biggest and only "fuck up" to me was when she crossed the line kissing Nanami without her consent in that hotel after their date, that's all really.

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joined Jun 12, 2015

Aoi was a favorite? Nope. From the pols on twitter it was always Louko.

Internet_lied
joined Jul 15, 2016

Aoi was a favorite? Nope. From the pols on twitter it was always Louko.

Aoi is a complex, flawed, and well-written character. Luoko is a living national treasure of Japan. I rest my case.

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joined Apr 11, 2022

AY YO???

They sexed

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joined Oct 6, 2014

This was a really good story, but leaves a sour taste in my tongue because I don't like Kae as a character. I know she works hard but it also feels like she has massive mary sue energy. Still, pretty cute. Would never want to interact with a person like Kae irl tho

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joined Jan 10, 2024

A plea to the translators, if you ever think of substituting a dialect with Scottish... don't. Just please, for the love of goddess, don't.

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joined Feb 25, 2023

What dialect do you think they should've used, then? Considering Nanami's dialect in the original, it makes perfect sense to render her dialogue in some similarly divergent dialect.

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joined Apr 10, 2023

Just read this series, and I really enjoyed it. It's got a slow start but from the explosion of plot events at chapter 16 onwards it was great. Aoi's one of the best side characters ever, the extremely rare example of the "bisexual slut" character archetype portrayed positively with her proclivities practically being a superpower to open up plot threads and get shit moving. She even turns Hime-chan gay just from one overheard conversation! You have to give her credit for that efficiency lmao.
Speaking of Hime-chan, her (emotionally) smacking the shit out of Kaede was very satisfying, I didn't expect that comeuppance to happen but Kaede'd broken three different women's hearts by being a flaky childish coward and she absolutely needed to have somebody finally turn on her for it instead of letting her off easy. The "Is that how you saw my confession too!? Just another goddamn mess to clean up!?" scene might be my favorite in the whole series, even though my favorite character Aoi isn't part of it :P

joined Apr 2, 2023

What dialect do you think they should've used, then? Considering Nanami's dialect in the original, it makes perfect sense to render her dialogue in some similarly divergent dialect.

This is one of my favorite series, but I've had several friends hard bounce off when it I rec it because of the dialect choice being so jarring to them. I apparently put blinders on and got through it and I'm always surprised when they comment on it and I go look and well... I can't tell them they're wrong.

To me personally, a regional dialect would be more appropriate. I think typically they fall back to very light American southern with a note saying the Japanese dialect she was speaking in in case someone wanted to google it. Vs what comes off as a separate national dialect entirely and very heavy. A few y'alls would be enough for me along with the occasions other characters note it, but I'm not the one who worked on it. Dealer's choice. I hope if it ever gets licensed they go my preferred route tho so I can get other people to read it easier.

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joined Apr 10, 2023

What dialect do you think they should've used, then? Considering Nanami's dialect in the original, it makes perfect sense to render her dialogue in some similarly divergent dialect.

This is one of my favorite series, but I've had several friends hard bounce off when it I rec it because of the dialect choice being so jarring to them. I apparently put blinders on and got through it and I'm always surprised when they comment on it and I go look and well... I can't tell them they're wrong.

To me personally, a regional dialect would be more appropriate. I think typically they fall back to very light American southern with a note saying the Japanese dialect she was speaking in in case someone wanted to google it. Vs what comes off as a separate national dialect entirely and very heavy. A few y'alls would be enough for me along with the occasions other characters note it, but I'm not the one who worked on it. Dealer's choice. I hope if it ever gets licensed they go my preferred route tho so I can get other people to read it easier.

the scanlator who made that choice was offering commissions priced in euro, so I'd imagine for them the scottish accent WAS a regional accent.

joined Apr 2, 2023

the scanlator who made that choice was offering commissions priced in euro, so I'd imagine for them the scottish accent WAS a regional accent.

Ah, I'm remembering that now. I still wish they hadn't done that, but not my time or money spent. I'll keep peppering the usual publishers for an official English release so I can get people to read it easier.

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joined Jan 10, 2024

To me personally, a regional dialect would be more appropriate. I think typically they fall back to very light American southern with a note saying the Japanese dialect she was speaking in in case someone wanted to google it. Vs what comes off as a separate national dialect entirely and very heavy. A few y'alls would be enough for me along with the occasions other characters note it, but I'm not the one who worked on it. Dealer's choice. I hope if it ever gets licensed they go my preferred route tho so I can get other people to read it easier.

Pretty much this is what I would have preferred, even just a different font to indicate she's speaking in regional dialect with asterisk explaining it would've been better. I don't want to insult Scottish language but the version of it used here feels very un-formal, i imagine this is what Scottish drunk hurling insults at you at the pub would sound like. I just can't take a work with lines like "I dinnae give a rat's arse aboot that" seriously, sorry.

joined May 23, 2023

https://medium.com/@peter91916/singularity-escaping-the-control-of-relationship-2dk-g-pen-alarm-clock-explanation-6592dcfdefab

Here is the full review of the series. And here I used the interview with the author as the reference, it should be helpful to you

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joined Apr 27, 2014

Oh my goodness, I am trying my best to read it with a Scottish accent, but I only got Gordom Ramsay as reference, so she kinda has that voice now xDDDD

I am done with the story now, I like Aoi!! I don't think she's poly, she just kinda "falls" for people quickly, I kinda wanted her with Nanami because they look awesome together, but I am satisfied with the ending :P

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joined Jan 16, 2021

I just can't even with that Scottish dialect. Just use "ya" like everyone does. How many chapters uses it? Maybe I'll just rewrite it myself instead of complaining

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IshtarAletheia
joined May 3, 2025

Immediate favourite.

Also that's SO MANY side girls damn!

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joined Mar 6, 2021

I enjoyed this manga overall; though I imagine it would be a lot more fun to see the different dialects in the original. However, I'm still not sold on the main pair. I appreciate that Kaede was shown to make an effort in the end, but it's not enough for me.

Why would Nanami fall for this woman? She's lazy, useless and a dead weight. She has Nanami covering practically all of their living expenses, while she squanders what little income she has on snacks and figurines and stupid stuff for herself. And I could excuse not contributing much financially when she's more or less unemployed, but she's not even doing anything to help around the house! In fact, she actively avoids it, with the excuse that "she's working" or that she's just so bad at housework and Nanami is so awesome she can do it for both of them. And we're supposed to see her doing the bare minimum—such as bringing in the laundry when it's raining or cooking for herself— as some incredible achievement. The fact that Nanami has to come back from work (I imagine quite late, considering that she works for a Japanese company that occasionally has their employees work overnight) every day to prepare the food and bath, while Kaede has been home the whole day makes my blood boil. And of course she also handles all the cleaning, laundry and shopping on her days off, because why wouldn't she.

The only good quality Kaede seems to have is her positivity and determination to achieve her dreams. But how in the world is that supposed to be enough? The only thing she actually does for Nanami is listen to her rant about work.

I'm not saying Kaede is a bad person; but she's not really even a good roommate, let alone partner. And we're supposed to believe that two other people also fell for her? While she's not even in-universe pretty, which I could at least see as a reason why she is apparently so popular. (Funnily enough, the other two pairs make a lot more sense to me, because I can see how she inspired them to pursue their passions. In contrast, they really do seem to have very little in common with Nanami). This just reinforces my impression that Kaede is the author's self-insert and this whole thing is their fantasy of having a gorgeous, capable girlfriend taking care of them.

TL;DR: Nanami deserves a lot better and Kaede reads as a self-insert fantasy.

Sidenote: I liked chubby Koyuki the best.

last edited at Mar 8, 2026 9:35PM

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