I've come back to reread this chapter 5 separate times today... Kishi's really good at sweet fluff when he puts his mind to it.
Also I've always appreciated his inclusion of Ian and Ed being dumb cheesy husbands, as well as the girls' yaoi fantasies, like he's poking fun at everyone without being judgemental or mean spirited. Like, if Virgins' Empire was exclusively about teenage girls' boobs and ass, I think I'd find it hard to digest, but since a lot of time is spent on the two men and fantasies of guys, it's clear he's going for a general lighthearted dumbassery.