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Pinekon
joined Jan 10, 2022

I don't know why but this felt kinda out of character compared to the first one. Something about their reactions to each other feels off.
Also not as hot as the first one imo. This one gave me much more of the feeling of "I'll give one of them a dick because otherwise I don't know how to depict them having sex" kind of porn while the first one feels more like "one of them just has a dick" kind of porn.

It's not even about "having one" but in general the previous one had a more natural escalation and a bit of a reason for things to get heated. Here it just happens.
I don't think it's bad, but I do think it's inferior.

joined Jan 6, 2017

I don't know why but this felt kinda out of character compared to the first one. Something about their reactions to each other feels off.
Also not as hot as the first one imo. This one gave me much more of the feeling of "I'll give one of them a dick because otherwise I don't know how to depict them having sex" kind of porn while the first one feels more like "one of them just has a dick" kind of porn.

It's not even about "having one" but in general the previous one had a more natural escalation and a bit of a reason for things to get heated. Here it just happens.
I don't think it's bad, but I do think it's inferior.

Well, for me both have perfectly understandable reasons for why things got heated. In the first one Takina got a love hotel bed which lead to sex, here Chisato got a sexy outfit which lead to sex. Honestly this one feels more natural than the last one.
It's just that the way Takina having a dick is handled in both feels different to me. I can't exactly explain it but here her dick feels like it's there for porn reasons while in the other it felt more... intimate I guess? Like it's something she just has. In that it felt more like Chisato and Takina-with-a-dick were making love while here it feels like Takina has a dick just so that the author can draw Chisato getting fucked if that makes sense? Even though there's still a bunch of great Takina expressions and the hugs were wonderful the framing of the sex still feels off to me

I still like it but definitely not a fave, either ChisaTaki or futanari wise

last edited at Mar 10, 2023 10:58PM

joined May 3, 2014

I love a possessive GF and this was super cute. Would have been better if it wasn't futanari don't like that at all bleh. Nothing worse than reading a SxT or just GxG book on Wattpad for fifteen chapters and then finding out they didn't put the damn futa tag on it and feeling like I wasted my time xD. Oh well odd to make it Futa but show nothing? whatever floats artist boat.

oh my god YAP HATE that on Wattpad!! ESPECIALY when the story was going nice AND IN THE MIDDLE !! Polyamory!….like WHAT? i hate harems/poly tags so I avoide them, and then there is the using the tags WRONG and pretending the story was still GxG, that made me really angry :/

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joined Oct 26, 2016

There's more! Maybe it's because I want to be in Chisato's position so badly but I love this series so far. I'd be so happy if the mangaka draws more. The sexy doesn't feel too wild and intense and the romance is great.

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joined Sep 27, 2017

There's more! Maybe it's because I want to be in Chisato's position so badly but I love this series so far. I'd be so happy if the mangaka draws more. The sexy doesn't feel too wild and intense and the romance is great.

I'm also hoping for more. I think I love both of these equally, and I'm guessing I would also love a third just as much.

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joined Apr 28, 2019

Another win!!

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joined Apr 14, 2022

The love bite was a great touch. It's cute seeing the always calm and composed Takina lose herself while making love enough to do something like that without even realising it.

More generally, I appreciate how this artist draws sensual doujin without drawing 50 close-ups of their bits.

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joined Sep 28, 2021

Guys it's just porn it ain't that deep

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joined Apr 14, 2022

Guys it's just porn it ain't that deep

There are 15 pages leading up to the smut, I think it's perfectly fair for people to discuss the content of the first 2/3rds of the book. And, like, for men who have a tendency to just jam it in at the first opportunity those pages probably don't matter, sure, but for most women setting a proper mood first is as an important part of making something appealing as the actual sex, I think. Not that I don't enjoy plain porn, but a good doujin can be so much better than that.

last edited at Mar 11, 2023 12:01PM

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joined Mar 29, 2021

words of wisdom from chisato

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joined Sep 27, 2017

Guys it's just porn it ain't that deep

There are 15 pages leading up to the smut, I think it's perfectly fair for people to discuss the content of the first 2/3rds of the book. And, like, for men who have a tendency to just jam it in at the first opportunity those pages probably don't matter, sure, but for most women setting a proper mood first is as an important part of making something appealing as the actual sex, I think. Not that I don't enjoy plain porn, but a good doujin can be so much better than that.

As a person that enjoys both works I feel like the creator, in my opinion, did a fine job setting the mood in both. The relationship between Chisato and Takina feels intimate to me, and the sex works well. Of course if people disagree with me that's fine as well, just for me at least there's a romantic and intimate mood in both that works well.

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joined Apr 14, 2022

As a person that enjoys both works I feel like the creator, in my opinion, did a fine job setting the mood in both. The relationship between Chisato and Takina feels intimate to me, and the sex works well. Of course if people disagree with me that's fine as well, just for me at least there's a romantic and intimate mood in both that works well.

Oh, I 100% agree. I didn't chime in on the discussion about whether it did or not myself because I didn't think I had much to add to the conversation, but I personally found both of these to be quite lovely.

last edited at Mar 11, 2023 2:12PM

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joined Feb 8, 2014

Guys it's just porn it ain't that deep

There are 15 pages leading up to the smut, I think it's perfectly fair for people to discuss the content of the first 2/3rds of the book. And, like, for men who have a tendency to just jam it in at the first opportunity those pages probably don't matter, sure, but for most women setting a proper mood first is as an important part of making something appealing as the actual sex, I think. Not that I don't enjoy plain porn, but a good doujin can be so much better than that.

As a person that enjoys both works I feel like the creator, in my opinion, did a fine job setting the mood in both. The relationship between Chisato and Takina feels intimate to me, and the sex works well. Of course if people disagree with me that's fine as well, just for me at least there's a romantic and intimate mood in both that works well.

Agree with you ^^
Mushihara's works usually show that such a lovely couple like chisataki can be both wholesome and intimate in the heat of a moment~

Yuibless
joined Jan 30, 2017

Another 100 of these, please.

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joined Oct 30, 2021

Ladies and gentlemen, the main difference btw this one and the previous one was that one was angry sex and the other was horny sex

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joined Aug 10, 2015

joder que rico

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joined Dec 18, 2013

Linterdiction posted:

I think it's really interesting how some futa can feel like het with boobs, and some, like this, is obviously super sapphic. I really enjoyed it. This artist does good sex expressions. Big shoutout to Chisato blushing at the back of her neck while getting her shit wrecked on her hands and knees, that is very inspired.

I don't really agree. Some do feel like het with boobs, but this is a midway ground in my opinion since it's always intercourse only. Felt like a more realistic and well drawn het sex to me actually.

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joined May 27, 2019

I wish there was an easier way to distinguish between hyper fetishized futa content and stuff like this, where it’s extremely easy to just imagine that Takina is a trans woman

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joined Apr 12, 2018

I wish there was an easier way to distinguish between hyper fetishized futa content and stuff like this, where it’s extremely easy to just imagine that Takina is a trans woman

Same here. I generally avoid the NSFW tag in general on here because it usually winds up feeling too shallow and pornographic, (and like, if I want to see porn, there's other places for that) and that goes double for futa content, despite conceptually that being something I really enjoy. But these two doujins really did it right, where the intimacy of the sex and their relationship is the focus, rather than the graphicness, and I really appreciate that.

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joined Feb 8, 2014

There's more! Maybe it's because I want to be in Chisato's position so badly but I love this series so far. I'd be so happy if the mangaka draws more. The sexy doesn't feel too wild and intense and the romance is great.

I'm also hoping for more. I think I love both of these equally, and I'm guessing I would also love a third just as much.

The third book is coming too xd
https://twitter.com/musihara/status/1632702885732712449?s=20

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joined Apr 19, 2012

The humping starts so abruptly that it's kind of funny. The cuddling was cute though

I thought I skipped a page or two when I was trying to force load the page and doubled back lol.

Thought this was very sweet!

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joined Apr 27, 2014

This one is cool cos even tho it's futanari, you don't really see the thing. No sucking either, that's the type of futa that I can actually enjoy, don't show me IT xD

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joined Apr 16, 2022

god when

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joined Jul 17, 2022

There's more! Maybe it's because I want to be in Chisato's position so badly but I love this series so far. I'd be so happy if the mangaka draws more. The sexy doesn't feel too wild and intense and the romance is great.

I'm also hoping for more. I think I love both of these equally, and I'm guessing I would also love a third just as much.

The third book is coming too xd
https://twitter.com/musihara/status/1632702885732712449?s=20

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joined Jul 17, 2022

ohmygosh fr

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