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joined Sep 11, 2019

The kind of development that i wasn't asking for, but that i didn't know that i needed

The kind of development that i wasn't asking for, but that i didn't know that i needed

uhuh. i relate

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joined Jul 18, 2017

coward.

I bet Hinoka is going to kiss her someday and Tsukushi is going to think is a platonic kiss

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joined Aug 29, 2019

I bet Hinoka is going to kiss her someday and Tsukushi is going to think is a platonic kiss

Good grief, yes, that's probably going to happen. I need to get it into my head that the series won't drop its centran conceit anytime soon. Let go of all hope, all ye who enter! They're going to be misunderstanding each other for a few more months, if things go well...

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joined Dec 7, 2020

I think this chapter was Hinoka realizing 3 things.

  1. She and Tsukushi aren’t dating.
  2. Her girl friend is made of one of the most dense materials known to man, sapphicium.
  3. Her manga deserves the Idiot Couple tag.

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joined Jun 30, 2021

LOL, I'm looking forward to this. Seems fun. I love their dynamic.

joined Apr 6, 2018

THE OBLIVIOUSNESS IS KILLING ME

La duchesse de Pecquigny
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joined Jun 7, 2021

You don't want a boyfriend, then... how about a girlfriend?

YES!!! At last! Ask her! Say the magical words!

... is what I wanted to ask, but I couldn't exactly do that.

IDIOT! USELESS! DIE!

Surprise(2)
joined Jun 17, 2021

Dynasty commenters really live in their own little world sometimes, haha. Is the story as presented in front of you not good enough?
Hinoka clearly doesn't think they're dating. She wants to, but she's a super coward and probably has been for years. She is super into all of the new attention she's getting though,

Miowink
joined Aug 21, 2020

Hinoka: I am in love with my best friend since childhood, and we are dating. Sometimes she says strange things though.

Tsukishi: fuck, how do i ask her out?? does she even like girls??

This was too good, I almost died laughing.

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joined Mar 25, 2021

Dynasty commenters really live in their own little world sometimes, haha. Is the story as presented in front of you not good enough?
Hinoka clearly doesn't think they're dating. She wants to, but she's a super coward and probably has been for years. She is super into all of the new attention she's getting though,

this plot twist would definitely be good tho

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joined Jul 15, 2016
  1. Her girl friend is made of one of the most dense materials known to man, sapphicium.

Dropping the science in here, I see.

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joined Jul 22, 2018

Alright, here I am... Where's the next chapter?

Maxresdefault2
joined Jan 31, 2018

The main character looks like Sora from 'Can't Defy the Lonely Girl'... but is way more dense! lmao

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joined Jan 11, 2019

CUTENESS 1000000000000

Kyouko
joined Dec 30, 2017

Alright, here I am... Where's the next chapter?

The next chapter was already out yesterday but hijiki deleted it since it got some backlash on twitter, no idea if the scanlation group managed to get the raws before it was taken down

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joined Oct 22, 2018

Alright, here I am... Where's the next chapter?

The next chapter was already out yesterday but hijiki deleted it since it got some backlash on twitter, no idea if the scanlation group managed to get the raws before it was taken down

What backlash?

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joined Aug 29, 2019

Alright, here I am... Where's the next chapter?

The next chapter was already out yesterday but hijiki deleted it since it got some backlash on twitter, no idea if the scanlation group managed to get the raws before it was taken down

What backlash?

Not to denigrate Hijiki at all, but isn't "backlash" basically all twitter's really known for in popular culture these days?
Jokes aside, I hope it was more like "people on twitter pointed out some things that diminished the work so Hijiki decided to do some revisions"...

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joined Apr 26, 2018

Hijikini deleted it because of some negative reactions for adding a molester in the story. The scene is on the busy train and some ugly old guy unhooks hinoka's bra. Tsukushi rescued her quickly but the man received no punishment in the end. Tho I think its supposed to have a continuation. But hijiki already deleted it and decided to create a different plot for Hinoka and Tsukushi in the future chapters. It's a little sad because the deleted chapter have 8 pages. But I'm still fine with it since I'm really disturb with the theme lol.

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joined Aug 29, 2019

Hijikini deleted it because of some negative reactions for adding a molester in the story. The scene is on the busy train and some ugly old guy unhooks hinoka's bra. Tsukushi rescued her quickly but the man received no punishment in the end. Tho I think its supposed to have a continuation. But hijiki already deleted it and decided to create a different plot for Hinoka and Tsukushi in the future chapters. It's a little sad because the deleted chapter have 8 pages. But I'm still fine with it since I'm really disturb with the theme lol.

Not a fan of authors changing their works due to backlash in general, but I see how it would have clashed big time with the feel of the story so far. Geez, Chikan really is creepy.

joined Feb 1, 2021

(bangs fists on table)

CUTE IDIOTS ONLY

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joined Oct 22, 2018

Hijikini deleted it because of some negative reactions for adding a molester in the story. The scene is on the busy train and some ugly old guy unhooks hinoka's bra. Tsukushi rescued her quickly but the man received no punishment in the end. Tho I think its supposed to have a continuation. But hijiki already deleted it and decided to create a different plot for Hinoka and Tsukushi in the future chapters. It's a little sad because the deleted chapter have 8 pages. But I'm still fine with it since I'm really disturb with the theme lol.

OK, then it's kinda understandable, since, as Zormau said in his reply, this does clash with the general feel of the story thus far.

joined Mar 24, 2021

I think I managed to see the continuation (at least it was marked 2/2). It was after they both left the train and Tsukushi seemed to comfort Hinoka and hug her, with some blushing during the hug, I think there was mention to the bra being unhooked which may have been what prompted the blushing. My Japanese is terrible though and I only know very few kanjis, so I may be completely off base with what happened. I also only skimmed it sadly, as I was waiting on the translation. Sad to read it was taken down though understandable, I suppose.

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Stardusttelepath8
joined Oct 15, 2014

I think I managed to see the continuation (at least it was marked 2/2). It was after they both left the train and Tsukushi seemed to comfort Hinoka and hug her, with some blushing during the hug, I think there was mention to the bra being unhooked which may have been what prompted the blushing. My Japanese is terrible though and I only know very few kanjis, so I may be completely off base with what happened. I also only skimmed it sadly, as I was waiting on the translation. Sad to read it was taken down though understandable, I suppose.

The 2/2 was technically because it was eight pages over two tweets.
I got the written translation here: https://pastebin.com/4cAjhb6S
Currently debating if it's something we should typeset or just leave in the void.
To summarise:
Tsukushi and Hinoka get seperated in a crowded train, and Tsukushi holds off on trying to squeeze past the other passengers to get to her. Then she spots chikanman and comes to her rescue, shooing him away as they leave the train. As Hinoka is reeling over the incident, Tsukushi blames herself for leaving Hinoka on her own and comforts her, at which point she discovers Hinoka's bra had been unhooked, leading Tsukushi to once again curse chikan man as she takes her to the bathroom.
I would imagine the second part would've involved some gay hijinks involving Tsukushi trying to fix Hinoka's bra, which admittedly would've caused tonal whiplash potentially worse than what the chapter itself already had.

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