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Capy%20white
joined Mar 21, 2019

Ehhh, I'm not feeling it. I just can't get into ones like this, even if I do like this author.

NewtMarshmallow
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joined Nov 5, 2017

Where's the rest of it, dammit

Gothic_Catalyst
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joined Jun 20, 2015

It kinda just ended like a cliff in the mist.

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joined Jan 18, 2016

that doesnt sound healthy? goddamnnnnnn hahaha

Sleepyfrogwaifutiny
joined Sep 25, 2019

...I mean... I guess it ends well?

Fetish%20notebook%20lsmol
joined May 20, 2013

w e w

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Rosmontis
Nevrilicious Scans
joined Jun 5, 2015

That was pretty predictable, though I guess bully being aware she was shit person and bullied realizing revenge was a mistake relatively fast was somewhat fresh, so you could say there was more room for them to naturally fall for each other, but resolution definitely felt lacking.

joined Oct 6, 2020

The writing for this... is terrible, to say the least. It's like the author just mashed random scenes into a juicer and hoped something decent will come out.

Gay%20panic
joined Sep 11, 2020

Ehhhnnn I dunno about this one.

I feel it should probably have rape and blackmail tags? Like yea they both fell in love or whatever at the end but it really sits kinda gross with me. No, not just kinda gross. It's real gross.

last edited at Apr 12, 2021 8:28PM

Gyerin200
joined Sep 6, 2011

This author is fucked up in the head and should hire a writer ASAP.

Pov_youre_a_triple_mugger
joined Feb 19, 2016

I had higher expectations from this author. This kind of rape shit is disgusting

last edited at Apr 12, 2021 8:44PM

TotemsInTheNight
joined Apr 9, 2021

Was expecting something sad from Avalon ~ Bitter, since it's the anthology that has Please by Sudou Yumi (https://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/please). Did not expect this. :(

OrangePekoe Admin
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joined Mar 20, 2013

All kinds of messed up.

joined Jun 19, 2018

I liked it lol. It definitely should have a rape tag though. I think the ending is bad if its genuinely trying to be sweet, but if its trying to be edgy then I like it.

Pikachuwhat
joined Mar 13, 2014

Bruh, was she sitting inside the school sink!?

Delinquint%20yuri
joined Sep 14, 2016

WeirdChamp

georgeoswalddannyson
joined Aug 21, 2019

The writing here was kinda disjointed

Cyclop school girl at page 19

joined May 3, 2019

Toxic

t6e1mediumtank
joined Feb 9, 2021

That was really nice, I hope more authors do stories like these

last edited at Apr 12, 2021 9:50PM

t6e1mediumtank
joined Feb 9, 2021

This author is fucked up in the head and should hire a writer ASAP.

Why? The author should be able to make whatever kind of story they want

Images
joined Dec 15, 2016

This was weird but I kind liked it

t6e1mediumtank
joined Feb 9, 2021

i HAd hIgHer eXpEcTatIonS FRoM tHiS AuthOr. ThIS KInD Of RApE ShIt Is DiSgUstiNg

Homumug
joined Jan 13, 2015

Local bully not so tough after getting molested.
Someone else probably already made this joke.

Test
joined Sep 8, 2019

Interesting.
I thought it's going to be happy at the start and bitter at the end. Instead, we get bitter at the start and happy at the end.

I guess they are in "love" with each other despite the unhealthy relationship they had.

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