Really jarring pacing. I had some suspicions about what I was getting into but I'm definitely glad the author's newer stories (i.e., FnR) are a lot less lurid about this stuff because it gives the interactions a lot more room to breathe and the characters get depth as a result

last edited at Apr 13, 2021 9:34AM

At least the art is nice ;).

Oooh this was really nice.

Idk if it's just me but I love this genre. The bully falling for the victim

They deserve each other
So I guess this is a good ending??

Nothing is funnier than people seriously reviewing porn a

fucked up bitches in fucked up love

WeirdChamp

to be fair sitting inside sinks are kinda comfy

Holy shit didn't expect everyone in this thread to be so butthurt they'd start spouting spouting philosophical/ politcal bullshit. JESUS CHRIST NO ONE GIVES A SHIT LMAO ABSOLUTE CRINGE GET A LIFE SERIOUSLY

Honestly I'm just gonna say the same thing that I did about the "no way I can have a girlfriend" series which is that there's just not that much to get horny over in this one. Once you get past the scandalous setup it's bland.

I mean ok, sure, if you're a feet person then hey that one page is pretty good though huh

ngl, I love this story.

same here

Agreed

A total dumpster trash fire this is

It's not that bad. The whole thing is contrived, but it's probably because of the one-shot format and the page number limitations.

But the scene in the school infirmary is somewhat hot.

I don't expect something in Avalon Bitter to be all fluff.

Hmmm, most relationships portrayed in manga aren't realistic or healthy anyway,so I'll say I liked this one.

That was hot. People bullying the person they have feelings for is a known trope anyway.

I can confirm this as with real life experience. I was very young and stupid and did the same.

ehhhh...what the hell was that

Holy shit didn't expect everyone in this thread to be so butthurt they'd start spouting spouting philosophical/ politcal bullshit. JESUS CHRIST NO ONE GIVES A SHIT LMAO ABSOLUTE CRINGE GET A LIFE SERIOUSLY

Clearly people do give a shit.

No need to be an asshole because others don't like something you like. Take your own advice and "get a life."

that was good

Introducing: Redo of a Transfer Student

The writing here was kinda disjointed

Yeah, it kinda went all over the place

I. Love. It. I WANT MOOAR

I love Mikanuji's art style, but the story could use more than a one-shot. I don't know. The middle of the story felt...short. I know I shouldn't criticize this one-shot since my writing is kinda the same.
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Yes, the pacing of the story! It definitely felt like it need more pages.

Edit: Also, I hate cliffhanger.

last edited at Apr 16, 2021 4:21AM

Can't believe I almost missed this one it was amazing I like the enemies to lovers trope depending on the execution and for a oneshot, it was done well. I only wish it was longer

I mean ok, sure, if you're a feet person then hey that one page is pretty good though huh

Weirdly specific lol.

I usually dig enemies to lovers but gotta agree this was pretty bad.

last edited at Apr 17, 2021 5:56PM

Mikanuji’s art is always really pleasant- I love all their work

Love the Art. That's all