Because it's hentai doesn't excuse everything. Being an hentai doesn't mean your plot doesn't matter.

I don’t think most people read/watch hentai for the plot...

Yeah then Kurogane should stop trying to make a coherent plot because it's start to really harm the story. Case in point with upcoming Ch.17 where not only Kuyou and Takako fuck each other but end up saying there were each other first love (??????), also the little texts for the characters and even the two in the chapters said that they basically just fuck each other (Risa/Minami/Kuyou/Takako) everytime. I willl go more on rant when chpater is uploaded but trust me i have some on my mind.

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Chapter is here and so i am. Like i said i have some on my mind about how the story is going. Like i said just before, it will be ok to think that plot don't matter in hentai but not when Kurogane is trying to make one.

What do you mean first love ? Didn't they see each other for the first time at the hotel ? Also didn't was the one and only time they fuck each other ? What is that first love bullshit now ? Didn't Kuyou even made Ito stop having sex with her and mom because she wanted to be her mom exclusive lover ? Which that being said is a fucking lie from both side. Mommy is horny as fuck and fuck both Takako (???? a bit out of nowhere) and Rise and also Ito for what the text told. Kuyou also being an hyphocrit because she said still do it with Rise. Why bring a forced drama/first love bullshit when the 4 persons include in this mess seem to already fuck each other ? Just make an orgy like last time and make them going together like an harem/ployamory thing , why trying so hard to make a plot that doesn't work ?

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Even for just a hentai manga, the plot hurts it so bad...

From a casual reskim, I think the idea is that while Takako's very much a sexhound, Kuyou's the first girl she's actually gone dokidoki for outside of sexytimes. Also this seems to pretty much confirm all the character side blurbs are canon (the post threesome ManaTaka interactions are mentioned in ch15).

I think most of us just accept that this is totally dumb and just enjoy it for what it is.

I think the idea is that while Takako's very much a sexhound, Kuyou's the first girl she's actually gone dokidoki for outside of sexytimes.

Which is pretty ironic since they've done it together ONCE.Imagine fucking all around and have a girlfriend but you fall in love with a girl that you fuck once in a threesome. Moreso than you fuck her girlfriend and she fucked yours.

I think most of us just accept that this is totally dumb and just enjoy it for what it is.

I can't because of how Kurogana try to shove her plot in the pron and how it doesn't work at all.

Remember when there used to be these character, what were they called... oh yeah, Tae and Jimiko? Haha.

...not that I'm complaining about this group of girls.

Takako x Kuyou is cute
Too bad it's pure sex and the plot doesn't make sense, but I'll follow it

it's so fucked up I love it <3 don't you feel it's kinda ironic?
I think it might be a one big ahaha lol lol lol from Kurogane-sensei, just can't stop smile rly

Never really expected any of the girls to stay monogamous since I still get Shojo Sect vibes everytime I read this (yes. I'm still bitter with that end).

Wait a minuteee?!

Ok, this is just dumb now. Why even bother with a story at this point? It's so convoluted and contradictory that it's not even necessary. Just put everyone together in a room and have them fuck each other's brains out and give up on whatever "story" this was supposed to be about.

This is pure bliss for a 'polygamist' like me o(^^o)(o^^o)(o^^o)(o^^)o

SEX IS THE END GAME

SEX IS THE END GAME

Sex is basically the whole manga

This is pure bliss for a 'polygamist' like me o(^^o)(o^^o)(o^^o)(o^^)o

It's probably heading down the poly route, but let's just admit that at this point in the story, it's just a bunch of sex fiends cheating on each other. I mean, characters profess their undying love to their long sought after partners, wanting them to be their one and only but then goes on to sleep with previous partners (or with just anyone in proximity) behind their lovers' backs. They'll maybe get around to all agree it's okay cause they all love each other, go on to have an orgy, then sorta all live together screwing like bunnies every day though.

Remember when there used to be these character, what were they called... oh yeah, Tae and Jimiko? Haha.

I feel like I should know these characters, but since I haven't seen them in something like 8 chapters they clearly must not be important.

Somehow this hentai is worse than Game of Thrones. Which is kinda amazing, cause I really don't like Game of Thrones.

Ok so yes, Tae and Jimiko were in fact canonically a contagious disease, I don't mind the story just being pure sex and poly stuff, it is what it is, but holy shit was this chapter aggravating. What was this first love stuff? I know Kurogane Ken is pretty liberal with their work and they favour poly stuff, but with Kuyou literally having said the other girl to stop fucking her cause "love", and now we get this. It's like the artist forgot what they wrote two chapters ago or they just never cared for what they wrote, which would be fine cause it's a hentai "lol story doesn't matter on a hentai" but come one, this one was just way too stupid even for itself.

This is pure bliss for a 'polygamist' like me o(^^o)(o^^o)(o^^o)(o^^)o

It's probably heading down the poly route, but let's just admit that at this point in the story, it's just a bunch of sex fiends cheating on each other. I mean, characters profess their undying love to their long sought after partners, wanting them to be their one and only but then goes on to sleep with previous partners (or with just anyone in proximity) behind their lovers' backs. They'll maybe get around to all agree it's okay cause they all love each other, go on to have an orgy, then sorta all live together screwing like bunnies every day though.

I think monogamy and polygamy share a dichotomy side that one shapes another. Love is just a word, the things that you share with differents persons are never the same. I think in this chapter, the word "first love" might trigger people. But well, "like a virgin", everytime i fall in love, i feel that's my "first love", or sometimes even my "first true love". So i have a lot of "first true love", but it doesnt make me love my current gf/lover less. I do love the term orgy on your critic tho..(since an org were originally a fallen elf, so even a pure elf can screw up really bad). I mean it's just a kind of life style you know, a very dionysian one indeed.

The dialog in this manga's surreal.

Chapter is here and so i am. Like i said i have some on my mind about how the story is going. Like i said just before, it will be ok to think that plot don't matter in hentai but not when Kurogane is trying to make one.

What do you mean first love ? Didn't they see each other for the first time at the hotel ? Also didn't was the one and only time they fuck each other ? What is that first love bullshit now ? Didn't Kuyou even made Ito stop having sex with her and mom because she wanted to be her mom exclusive lover ? Which that being said is a fucking lie from both side. Mommy is horny as fuck and fuck both Takako (???? a bit out of nowhere) and Rise and also Ito for what the text told. Kuyou also being an hyphocrit because she said still do it with Rise. Why bring a forced drama/first love bullshit when the 4 persons include in this mess seem to already fuck each other ? Just make an orgy like last time and make them going together like an harem/ployamory thing , why trying so hard to make a plot that doesn't work ?

Get over it dude

Chapter is here and so i am. Like i said i have some on my mind about how the story is going. Like i said just before, it will be ok to think that plot don't matter in hentai but not when Kurogane is trying to make one.

What do you mean first love ? Didn't they see each other for the first time at the hotel ? Also didn't was the one and only time they fuck each other ? What is that first love bullshit now ? Didn't Kuyou even made Ito stop having sex with her and mom because she wanted to be her mom exclusive lover ? Which that being said is a fucking lie from both side. Mommy is horny as fuck and fuck both Takako (???? a bit out of nowhere) and Rise and also Ito for what the text told. Kuyou also being an hyphocrit because she said still do it with Rise. Why bring a forced drama/first love bullshit when the 4 persons include in this mess seem to already fuck each other ? Just make an orgy like last time and make them going together like an harem/ployamory thing , why trying so hard to make a plot that doesn't work ?

Cmon dude
This is just a porn manga and this whole plot is just a fetish for the author
Have you not read any of his/her other work?
Kurogane manga always has a wierd feel to it and this one is not an exception

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Personally I’d like Ito and Manami to get back together. If they’re not gonna stick with the established pairings then neither am I!

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Cmon dude
This is just a porn manga and this whole plot is just a fetish for the author
Have you not read any of his/her other work?
Kurogane manga always has a wierd feel to it and this one is not an exception

Yes yes yes and yes!!! That 'weird feel' fetish is exactly the unique trait of Kurogane manga.

Pathetic, hentai or not.

Chapter is here and so i am. Like i said i have some on my mind about how the story is going. Like i said just before, it will be ok to think that plot don't matter in hentai but not when Kurogane is trying to make one.

What do you mean first love ? Didn't they see each other for the first time at the hotel ? Also didn't was the one and only time they fuck each other ? What is that first love bullshit now ? Didn't Kuyou even made Ito stop having sex with her and mom because she wanted to be her mom exclusive lover ? Which that being said is a fucking lie from both side. Mommy is horny as fuck and fuck both Takako (???? a bit out of nowhere) and Rise and also Ito for what the text told. Kuyou also being an hyphocrit because she said still do it with Rise. Why bring a forced drama/first love bullshit when the 4 persons include in this mess seem to already fuck each other ? Just make an orgy like last time and make them going together like an harem/ployamory thing , why trying so hard to make a plot that doesn't work ?

Cmon dude
This is just a porn manga and this whole plot is just a fetish for the author
Have you not read any of his/her other work?
Kurogane manga always has a wierd feel to it and this one is not an exception

That might be the strangest excuse i ever heard for justifying a bad writing. It's a "fetish" ? What kind of person have a fetish of writing incoherent plot in a hentai ? It will be easier to admit that the plot is bad and Kurogane has fail wiriting this one instead of wierd justification like that. Mira has already shown that you can make porn and have a decent story so NO, just because it's a porn doesn't mean neceserally that the plot should be bad.
I've read District 4 and beside the unnecessary blackmail at the end, the story and writing was good. I wouldn't mind the plot if Kurogane wasn't trying to make it work. "But muh porn" It's hard to enjoy the porn when Kurogane shove his bad writing in it.
Like i said Kuyou making Ito quit having sex with her and her mom but still fuck around with Rise and Takako being mad that RIse fuck around with Manami, not to mention Rise who fuck around with Manami and Kuyou. It's like the chapters where Ito make Kuyou confess and where Kuyou ask Ito to stop having sex doesn't happen. Same for the threesome, i thought it was for Rise to understand but nope. Hell, it's even mention that Ito still come see Minami once a week. Kurogane should trying to make the plot and just have the girls enjoying together their relation as an harem/open relation where they just fuck other around and sometimes having orgy/theesomes, it's better than still having it doing behind each other back when they clearly already know that their respective partner is fucking around. The irony in this, it's that the two falling in love in the chapter have just fuck each other once in a threesome.

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