It felt so real, how they interacted, how they didn't say how they felt, but at the same time understood the other person wasn't saying what was on their mind, how they snuggled together even in doubt
I don't know what I'm saying, all I want to say is this felt so genuine, something very simple yet intricate

That was so sweet.

Niceee

Ah I love stories like this, it's so easy to get sucked into their reality, while reading this I forgot I was in class lol

I SEE RINGS AT THE END
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Kiri is so cute oh my god.

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Lovely! Adult yuri is amazing.

And that hug in page 27... adorable!!

Oh thank god, it ended well. I was afraid she was going to die of a Japanese Cold or something for a moment there.
I fuckin' love this artstyle, though. There's a wonderful sense of softness to it.

It's absolutely wonderful

I want an OVA of this... I wish there was an anthology series of just yuri short stories

This was really nice. I'm happy the drama didn't take over and we got a happy ending. <3

What a tender story. Typically I get annoyed when a character decides to move away from the person that they love, but it's explained in a way that can be understood and related to here.
Good read, looking forward to more work from this author.

"You're cute with a little chub" laughed way too hard at that thinking of it in a het sense. Long one shot (not a complaint) but feels in the middle

Onion.. cutting... ninjaaaassss where r u hiding ;u;

Oh thank god, it ended well. I was afraid she was going to die of a Japanese Cold or something for a moment there.
I fuckin' love this artstyle, though. There's a wonderful sense of softness to it.

Japanese Cold lmao

This was lovely, thanks to the sexiest detectives Akiba has to offer for their hard work and excellent taste!

I'm confused. so both of them are ice crafter?

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This was really sweet and cute! I hope they'll be able to be together again!!

I keep re-reading it and re-reading it.

Words fail to describe the level of perfection exhibited by the writing and drawing captured
in this one-shot.

It's truly a work of art and joins the rare subset of Yuri romances portraying healthy
relationships as they should be idealized: mature, simple, caring, and warm.

I feel like this will be something I come back to read and re-read, and be able to appreciate it more each time. All around a wonderful, sweet and well-written story.

After rereading it today, I realized something that really stands out to me, but which I hadn't realized before. Both characters have distinct personalities without using the typical male/aggressive trope. They're both women and it reads like that. Another thing that is very typical, the size difference, is also handled much more subtly, which makes it feel more realistic

I am sorry. I'm not entirely sure why Nacchan can't return to tokyo. I got the idea she was bullied at school, but that seems like a childish thing to risk losing the love of her life over.

Painful experiences can really effect you for a long time and it seems that Tokyo just triggers bad memories for her. Besides the bullying it looks like her mother also left them to go back to Tokyo and now her lover is also leaving for Tokyo. So she probably associates Tokyo with a lot of negativity and it's a hard thing to break.

I don't think it will help their relationship much if she's constantly unhappy being in Tokyo even being with the love of her life. It might even destroy what they have.

I don't think this story had a bad ending. I just would have rather seen Nacchan overcome her fear of Tokyo, and gone with Kiri, in the end. separations in romance make me sad. Even if the couple get back together. I think of all the time they wasted apart.

It would've made for some nice character development yes, but with the limited time of a one shot it would've just come off as cheap, overly fast paced, irrealistic and underwhelming. If it was a series I would most definitely agree, but in a one shot I feel a time skip where there's no major developments but it just ties a nice end to it like this is more fitting.
I loved everything about this. The art, the realism feel, the story, the characters, the storytelling. Definitely up top in my favorite one shots.

Loved reading this. Very touching and relatable.

This was a terrific read!

just reread this, its so good. so very few works are able to take such a hard situation like moving away from your lover, make the characters relatable and feel real, have the perfect mix of drama and cute, all while having gorgeous artwork. honestly amazing.

I wish more things like this were translated i really treasure stuff like this. thank you akiba detectives and sono