I don't expect Mira to make things too weird but page 23 gives me incoming Aaaangst vibes

Interesting to see how Mira went from fantasy stuff to stuff she prefers nowadays lol

Money talks, as they say. That said, Mira has talent that I wish she would still at least every once in a while dedicate to a story that doesn't involve biologically impossible boobs. lol It's always the enormous weather balloon boobies that ruin any kind of story immersion for me. lol

the abundance of fluids and copulation happening everywhere doesn't ruin the immersion, lol?

That does too, but for some reason the enormous bazongas are worse for me (at least with Mira). Having stuff spraying everywhere like they have SuperSoaker9000s stored up in their bits is also rather distracting, heh.

Ah, the irrational-to-the-point-of-suicidal type, eh.

Shall we expect drunk sex in next chapter?

I like this pairing Aluna and Rize

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Wtf with that cliffhanger

Still loving it, though I can't help but think Rize would have phrased it a little more delicately than 'fuck me'.

Man...
This author’s amazin eh?

Kill IT! KILL IT! (I meant the story... It's dragging and grinding on)

This is truly polarizing. I was once team Pall, now I'm team Rize. Either way, it seems someone is going to lose.

i like rize

Kill IT! KILL IT! (I meant the story... It's dragging and grinding on)

Totally understand you fam

Since Pall is literally sucking the life out of of her every time she kills a bird, does that mean if Pall dies she gets her lifespan back?

So it was stated a while back that there were ten chapters of this ... has an eleventh materialized in the interim?

I like her with Rize I hope she doesn’t die. I don’t like pall at all

Yeah, what a turn. I didn't like Rize at first but now I want Aluna to be with Rize instead of Pall. Palls' indecisiveness ruining Aluna.

The true waifu has appeared...
At last, for f-ing finally

I also prefer Rize :(

Kill IT! KILL IT! (I meant the story... It's dragging and grinding on)

Totally understand you fam

AFAIK three chapters left.

So it was stated a while back that there were ten chapters of this ... has an eleventh materialized in the interim?

I've heard there are 14 chapters.

last edited at Jun 23, 2019 11:01AM

This is good When's the next update

I really enjoy this can't wait

I like her with Rize

Who knew Mira was capable of making a pretty compelling story? As much as I like those NSFW works, I'd like to see more stories like these

This turned into an insane mess. I never knew Mira has written something of this level; old school yet daring and original. I personally do not care whatever Aluna decides as long as she can remain badass and assume herself free. To be honest, I would like to see her helping her former allies to execute a coup d'Etat so her brother could become king so she could live a free life away from these torments.

I'm team Rize too.