Well, Chiaki's number 1 and she loves number 1

A very abridged version of A Kiss and a White Lily. (Or Comprehensive Tovarisch, if you prefer.)

A very abridged version of A Kiss and a White Lily. (Or Comprehensive Tovarisch, if you prefer.)

Yea definitely reminds me of them

I like Anokiss and Comprehensive Tovarisch isn't bad, but that doesn't mean I want to see another story using that exact plot

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That was the ol' "one-two" right there. I'm weak and the last line fucking made me cry. Instant favorite because of the last page. Honestly, I'm a sucker for the trope and all the digressions are the reason I stopped reading Kiss and a White Lily. This one gets to the fucking point and doesn't string me along, so I'm all over it.

I thought this was a cute one-shot regardless of its similarity with other series.

Well if Momoka manages to land Chiaki doesn't it mean that she's ultimately won?

im kinda a fan of how this author takes manga that lasts far to long and spreads itself an puts it into a oneshot. a kiss and white lily in 18? and sasameki koto in 4? i love it

Cute.

I get the gist of it, but the dialogues were confusing.

She's "odd"? How so?

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https://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/loser_no1#16
That smile kinda reminds me of Nettaigyo's Koyuki

She's "odd"? How so?

She's buying more Mocky than is strictly socially acceptable.

Kinda out of pase but i like it.

Awwwwwwwwwww

Awww, I thought that was super cute.

i was thinking about something really twisted... doesn't momoka love's chiaki because she is number one in everything? so she keep being number two for chiaki to stay number one and keeps loving her because if chiaki wasn't first momoka would lost interest in her?........... otherthinking......

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I get the gist of it, but the dialogues were confusing.

She's "odd"? How so?

I think it was supposed to be a "Sasameki Koto" like situation where everyone in the school figures out that the girl is gay and treats her like she's strange because of it. So it was kind of a mixture of tropes from other successful, much longer series.