What!? They haven't Kissed yet??? But they already held hands múltiple times!

Edit: I reread the whole thing and they didnt, I was wrong...

last edited at Jun 15, 2018 12:24AM

How sneaky, Nanoha. :^)

Can't wait for chapters 22 and 23 to come out.
what happened in chapter 22 and 23?!!

Nothing big, but I personally liked those chapters, haha. Although if you do want to know, they were flashbacks of how Chidori and Nanoha got together, and it’s really endearing.

what a juicy spoiler~ I love it

Almost give a heart attack omg

awwwwwwwwwwww. this chapter was extra cute

I think a page is missing... or is it just me

I love this art style

last edited at Jun 15, 2018 3:57AM

They're so pure and I love how the other girl fixed what I assumed to be the part of scarf that sticks out at the end haha. Not taking chances, isn't she...

I think a page is missing... or is it just me

That was my impression too.

I think a page is missing... or is it just me

That was my impression too.

This chapter's 10 pages long like the others, and they're all there. What's missing?

Still waiting for that kiss dough

forehead, love forehead

I think a page is missing... or is it just me

That was my impression too.

This chapter's 10 pages long like the others, and they're all there. What's missing?

ah, Nanoha just "fixed" the sticking-out triangle scarf of her collar, that it wouldn't be visible lol. She's so cute

Can't quite word how much I enjoy this story. So many little touches. Lots of little bits of originality. Can't say the secret relationship from friends does anything for me though.

Wow. Chidori's eyes are just so gorgeous. And sultry?

I’m interested.. keep it coming ಠ_ಠ

That cliffhanger is criminal.

Finally! The backstory arc.
Gee I wonder who will chidori give those chocolates to? How mysterious and unpredictable

Wow, I alredy now what happens, I mean, they're a cuple now, but, want to see the second part!

what the fuck, how can this series get even cuter

That cliffhanger is criminal.

Is this not the traditional “made each special Valentines Day chocolates but now are too embarrassed to even look at each other let alone give it, but they will eventually”?

I thought that was a requirement in yuri relationships.

Finally get to see how it all started

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Oh that was cute, I hope they start dating

Oh that was cute, I hope they start dating

But first yuri drama. We have to watch them do the "do i give it to her" dance.

"The real thing"... it lacks the cultural context here.

She meant it was Honmei choco.

"The real thing"... it lacks the cultural context here.

She meant it was Honmei choco.

Well, yeah. I thought the implications were pretty clear though: in speculating about Chidori's chocolate, Nanoha recalls all the effort she put into preparing chocolate herself and realizes her own feelings. It'd be fairly unpleasant to read if I left it as "they're... honmei" and put "TL: honmei choco refers to Valentine's Day chocolate that a girl gives as an indication of romantic love rather than out of friendship or obligation" at the bottom.

Some things just don't translate cleanly. This way "the real thing" can refer both to the chocolate and to her feelings. Not a perfect solution, but it gets the point across, sounds more or less natural, and, most importantly, it fits in the bubbles.