But it's not grammatically incorrect. You start letters in english as, say: "Dear [Hoky]," or "Dear [Bob]" with the subject in the brackets I'm placing.
In this case, it'd be "Dear [My Teacher]." That's absolutely correct. Saying "My Dear Teacher" is something entirely different in meaning. In the former case, it means something along the lines of "to my teacher" and in your erroneously fixed version it means "my important teacher." The point of the title is that it's the person's feelings they are trying to send to their teacher.

"Dear Teacher" would probably be a more natural way to phrase it in English than "Dear My Teacher", but eh, it gets the idea across.

Back on topic, I'm starting to think that another commenter's theory earlier in the thread that Rii was Kohsaka's previous target is right on the money. She's being a little too serious and intense for somebody who doesn't suspect what's going on.

It also sounds significantly less personal to say Dear Teacher.

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Also, I hope LilyBlack you're right. But based on what someone else posted in here earlier, I'm not getting my hopes up. The way the first page reintroduces the story (granted it would've been nice if that were translated too :P) kinda makes it look like your typical yuri manga overlooking obvious child abuse. I hope I'm wrong but... Yeah...

Honestly, even if that prediction is right, it's still compatible with the angle it currently seems to be going for, which is that Kohsaka's shepherding girls into adulthood by introducing them to sex and is ultimately going to be presented as benevolent or at least neutral. Which, yeah, pretty messed up.

Wow. So many hate. i bet they wouldn't like the ending of this manga

The story seems to be treating what happaned as okay. Like Kousaka-san is just showing Jinno-san a path to adulthood. What Kousaka-san did is.... well rape. There is really no getting around it. I think I would be cool with what happaned between Kousaka-san and Jinno-san, if Jinno-san had understood what was happening and gave permission, but this is hard to swallow. I always want to root for yuri love. Sometimes the story makes it hard to. though.

Geeze. I wish they would post these comments, latest to earliest.

Okay this is going exactly where I expected it to. And that's not a good thing. While I'm not shocked, I'm not going to hide my disappointment and disgust. There's no question that woman's a rapist. And this author is condoning this behavior as acceptable as a romantic relationship. I understand the draw of loli and age gap manga. While I'm not big on loli I've enjoyed various age gap stories like My Dear Teacher (I refuse to use the Engrish title). Such stories didn't involve watching a grown adult grooming a child and outright tossing her into bed and raping her. This one goes beyond the pale. Keep in mind, I'm cool with the story being here and being available for everyone to read. I'm sure there are some people who're enjoying it. But I'm thoroughly disgusted with it.

COMPLETELY agree with this. And as other people have already pointed out, the fact that the girl's reaction is similar to how one might actually react after an experience like this is just... really fucking creepy. When Kousaka whisked her into the house like that, I could feel the tension rising up until that point, and then my heart just sank when I realized that it really was going to happen like this.
Romance manga is fantasy, which makes it possible to portray something that ordinarily rarely works (like a relationship with a large age gap) in a way that's sweet or sexy. But choosing to use that fantasy instead to excuse what was obviously rape is just incredibly messed up. I'm definitely not coming back to this.

I think there are a number of factors contributing to this feeling like rape, in addition to the girl being 13 and the adult being 30 something. Her behavior is... creepy to say the least. She doesn't appear to want anything to do with adults. I wonder if the author is aware of just how creepy she's made Kousaka-san. Also even if Jinno-san understood what was going on... In Japan she's not at the age of consent. It's rape any way you slice it.

I think there are a number of factors contributing to this feeling like rape, in addition to the girl being 13 and the adult being 30 something. Her behavior is... creepy to say the least. She doesn't appear to want anything to do with adults. I wonder if the author is aware of just how creepy she's made Kousaka-san. Also even if Jinno-san understood what was going on... In Japan she's not at the age of consent. It's rape any way you slice it.

Yeah your right, it's rape no matter how you slice it. I would just feel better, if Jinno-san at least understood and consented. Even if the consent meant nothing legaly.

I think there are a number of factors contributing to this feeling like rape, in addition to the girl being 13 and the adult being 30 something. Her behavior is... creepy to say the least. She doesn't appear to want anything to do with adults. I wonder if the author is aware of just how creepy she's made Kousaka-san. Also even if Jinno-san understood what was going on... In Japan she's not at the age of consent. It's rape any way you slice it.

I completely agree Trough she isn 13 but 14
https://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/kimi_wa_shoujo_ch01#12
Most girls at this age do know what sex is. so I wonder why the auther did this.
Yes this rape, is still wonder how it wil end..
The strory is still good. I never readed something like this so it's Interesting 2 me

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To be honest someone casually took my first time and we were barely acquaintances and I guess I consented without saying yes and I was kinda scared but it wasnt as bad as I thought It would be my point is I guess that its fiction and while most people might not like it some people do enjoy it if you dont like it just dont read it.

And I in no way condone sex without consent in reality but people will keep writing stuff like this for years to come the author knows it's not right we all know it's not right nobody is really breaking any new ground

Is Jinno confusing PTSD for love?

Anyway, this chapter needs a Masturbation tag I think.

Man, seeing a huge debate form every time a situation of questionable consent pops up in a manga is getting really old at this point. I'm here to read the story, not the ten-thousandth lecture on the definition of rape.
I find this manga really interesting. Did anyone appreciate the reversal in the last chapter that flips around the event where they met at the pond? Also, I'm interested in what role glasses-friend is gonna play in the future.

Sometimes you just have to fuck something out of your system. Clearly the little heroine is unable to move on without resolving her ... tensions.

Also, I'm interested in what role glasses-friend is gonna play in the future.

She's gonna get raped.

At this point the older one feels like a succubus or something. In a fantasy setting, that would have been nice. The reactions of the girl are bit too realistic for me to enjoy the pair, though.

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Let's put the fact everyone is missing for some point.
Rii is in love with Jinno.

Man, seeing a huge debate form every time a situation of questionable consent pops up in a manga is getting really old at this point. I'm here to read the story, not the ten-thousandth lecture on the definition of rape.
I find this manga really interesting. Did anyone appreciate the reversal in the last chapter that flips around the event where they met at the pond? Also, I'm interested in what role glasses-friend is gonna play in the future.

Yeah. It's really odd how we as a people have become more open and accepting to things, receptive of other people's ideas...

Yet at the same time, become so absolutist on certain issues. I don't know how (or why) others are reading this as condoning the pairing outright, but I'm reading this with a lot of tension and suspense. I sort of like the 'sleepy small town' setting with so many people familiar with that mysterious figure, it adds to this.

Not to mention, there are plenty of works out there: Movies, books, even video games, which do questionable and outright gross things to make their consumers uncomfortable, as the intended reaction. That doesn't mean it approves specifically of what happened inside the material--be it gore or sex or anything else. I hope people can come to understand that, down the line.

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morter posted:

Not to mention, there are plenty of works out there: Movies, books, even video games, which do questionable and outright gross things to make their consumers uncomfortable, as the intended reaction. That doesn't mean it approves specifically of what happened inside the material--be it gore or sex or anything else. I hope people can come to understand that, down the line.

cough violence cough

But yea, there are definitely some works that paint certain bad things as positive, but it doesn't mean, every work that features them, necessary encourages them. It can condemn or even comment on them as well. Also fiction is perfect place to explore less comfortable and darker places, without actually experiencing them. Especially when they are actually written fairly realistic and not overfictionalized. Other media does it, so I see no reason why manga should be different.

Don't like it feels rapey or maybe portray actual rape? Nobody forces you to read it. There is plenty fluffy yuri out there. Some people just like to be taken out of their comfort zone and experience something different in the story. Not every work has to be light-hearted romance.

Let's put the fact everyone is missing for some point.
Rii is in love with Jinno.

Haha you're right. Did you see the raws?

It's only okay when Murciélago portrays similar themes, gals. Move on, nothing to see other than forced moral talk over here.

Nobody is saying Murcielago is ok in portrarying sexual violence. In fact, pretty much every action in that manga can be summed up with "This is extremely fucked up, we know".

Here tho, we have an adult woman grooming and raping a young girl, too young and too naive to even give consent, and the artist seems to be trying to portray it with romantic undertones. Like this is supposed to be something to support. And no

Man, seeing a huge debate form every time a situation of questionable consent pops up in a manga is getting really old at this point. I'm here to read the story, not the ten-thousandth lecture on the definition of rape.
I find this manga really interesting. Did anyone appreciate the reversal in the last chapter that flips around the event where they met at the pond? Also, I'm interested in what role glasses-friend is gonna play in the future.

High five here. I am with you.

I'm hoping this ends with Kousaka getting thrown into prison and Jinno getting some serious emotional support... buuuut I know it won't

I'm hoping this ends with Kousaka getting thrown into prison and Jinno getting some serious emotional support... buuuut I know it won't

You're correct she won't

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...is this call me by your name

I'm hoping this ends with Kousaka getting thrown into prison and Jinno getting some serious emotional support... buuuut I know it won't

You're correct she won't

Spoil me the ending please hahaha I don't want to read this anymore but at the same time I'm curious about the ending. I know it's silly but yeah that's me being me.

auikimaya posted:

It's only okay when Murciélago portrays similar themes, gals. Move on, nothing to see other than forced moral talk over here.

Nobody is saying Murcielago is ok in portrarying sexual violence. In fact, pretty much every action in that manga can be summed up with "This is extremely fucked up, we know".

Here tho, we have an adult woman grooming and raping a young girl, too young and too naive to even give consent, and the artist seems to be trying to portray it with romantic undertones. Like this is supposed to be something to support. And no

Wait wait wait, so the author was supposed to draw the adult woman with an evil smile, horns and stuff like that? like "HEY THIS IS THE BAD PERSON HERE! DON'T DO THIS IS BAAAD" and the girl with tears and scratches? like, there's sex with flowers and sugar and then there's demonic sex and the author is in obligation to demonstrate the difference every time, because this isn't a manga story, is sex education, a psychological example of a bad encounter? well no... Why can't you just use the same excuse of Murcielago and accept this for what it is? do you avoid every violence action or sexual behavior en manga/anime? you want every story to be about good people having a good time? sorry for all the questions, my point is, this is a story, it doesn't have to be black or white, it doesn't have to suit your sense of morals or your tastes at all, is just telling certain event, whatever the characters feel is not for us to decide and if they end up together is not the author saying "Yeah I support rape" she/he just wanted to tell a story.

Rape is bad? Of course, I think I speak for everyone here when I say that.
Rape is bad therefore there shouldn't be any stories portraying such action? Well, no.

Seriously, I think if any of the people complaining had to make the chapter 3 it would be "Hello, police? yeah I want to report something ... [The End]"

PS: If you want to know the ending just look for the raws somewhere else and keep it to yourself geez

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