Read this because I liked Pulse, Got dissapointed. There's barely a story in this and the couple is too unequal.
Would have been better if Donut became more confident towards the end or could hold P'meh's hand while confronting her father or comfort her after confronting her father or something. Anything to keep her from seeming like she was no more than just a hamster P'meh saved because she was so cute.
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