Wow..uh what did I just read...seriously what...

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MFW reading the tags

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Well... it had some nice quotes, at least.

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puking and punching aside, I had a lady boner

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it's more fun if you don't read and just enjoy the scene.
And probably has more sense

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Nice, a yuri ryona. Here's hoping for more in the future.

Also, while this piece feels a bit jumpy, it's still sexy.

The art is good enough,but the story and choreography could had been much better if this was handled by someone like Remora.

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Puking

Oh dear, what am I getting myself into...

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Classic breaking the tough girl by raping her hentai but with a twist. As always yuri version is better

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It was hot but, like wtf did I just read?

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the art is good enoug, but I really have trouble understanding what's going on in each single panel, not to mention the whole thing

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Puke Kiss, yay...

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No nsfw tag?

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It reads like 6 people were tasked with writing the dialog separately and were given vauge directions as to what to write down then all the text thrown at a wall then assembled in random order.

Ahhh, the ol' Overwatch lore writing strategy...

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No nsfw tag?

No Rape either.

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It reads like 6 people were tasked with writing the dialog separately and were given vauge directions as to what to write down then all the text thrown at a wall then assembled in random order.

The vague directions ruined the whole thing. No directions should've been given.

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Oh neat, this got a translation. Hope the rest of the series gets one, as well.

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There was something off about the dialogue. And everything else, but still.

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I need more of this.

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Yeah, it really wasn't very good. And that's coming from a big fan of, you know, catfighting and wrestling and girls hitting each other in general...

The dialogue made very little sense, the story didn't flow at all (what with characters disappearing in the middle and there being very little context for any of it), and the art, while nice, was just about as jumbled and messy as the story and the dialogue. Would love to see something like this be handled by another artist.

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it was weird but i want her thighs to strangle me

I understand that feeling completely

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Those muscles... drools

I do not care about the weird dialogue and stuff, this was awesome! Hot girls, with hot muscles, in hot action, plus violence~~
I hope SAD will release the 2 sequel doujins as well, though considering how little sense the English translation made here, I am actually alright with just looking at the pretty pictures in this case.

it was weird but i want her thighs to strangle me

I understand that feeling completely

Same.

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This was weird, but I'm not gonna say "Eww... Just no... no." I wouldn't be so rude to shame anybody's... strange fetish. If the content just simply disgusted you then there is no need to trash this because the tags are literally right there, you knew what you were getting into—however the flow is really jambled up, that's certainly one legitimate complaint

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Those muscles... drools

I do not care about the weird dialogue and stuff, this was awesome! Hot girls, with hot muscles, in hot action, plus violence~~
I hope SAD will release the 2 sequel doujins as well, though considering how little sense the English translation made here, I am actually alright with just looking at the pretty pictures in this case.

Don't know for sure, but I think that this was a commissioned work. As the very least, I don't see a post on their website.

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my god there is some weird shit in this world lol. art is fantastic though

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Puking

Oh dear, what am I getting myself into...

Yea, I vote for a What the fuck am I reading? tag...cause....seriously....Dafuq?

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