"No more licking!"

One of the best lines to yell at someone.

I can't think straight.

Well I mean considering what's going on at the moment, I'm pretty sure you're as far from straight as you can be at the moment.

Also I like how the last page implied that Sanae magically made Mokou and Sumireko have a baby off-screen.

I can't think straight.

Well I mean considering what's going on at the moment, I'm pretty sure you're as far from straight as you can be at the moment.

Also I like how the last page implied that Sanae magically made Mokou and Sumireko have a baby off-screen.

It's a Miracle!

Miracle solve everything!

I really have no idea what's going on here. Mokou is in the real world? That woman is Renko's ancestor, so what's she doing around Renko? What's the background here?

I really have no idea what's going on here. Mokou is in the real world? That woman is Renko's ancestor, so what's she doing around Renko? What's the background here?

Seems that the author interpreted Sumireko to be Renko's ancestor, since her title is "The Secret Sealing club's First President". Sumireko is the character introduced in Urban Legend in Limbo, who came to Gensokyo from the outside world. Maribel and Renko are apparently dating. Sumireko fell in love with Mokou, which means she won't have a child, causing Renko to disappear from the timeline. Maribel seems like she came over to convince Sumireko to have children.

"afterwards they wanted something and they got it handed to them"

Most descriptive story ever thought of.

Can't believe that liking women disrupted the timeline.

I really have no idea what's going on here. Mokou is in the real world? That woman is Renko's ancestor, so what's she doing around Renko? What's the background here?

Seems that the author interpreted Sumireko to be Renko's ancestor, since her title is "The Secret Sealing club's First President". Sumireko is the character introduced in Urban Legend in Limbo, who came to Gensokyo from the outside world. Maribel and Renko are apparently dating. Sumireko fell in love with Mokou, which means she won't have a child, causing Renko to disappear from the timeline. Maribel seems like she came over to convince Sumireko to have children.

Pretty much this, but a few other points. Sumireko and Renko share the same surname, so it's not too much a stretch that she'd be Renko's ancestor. Also, Sumireko can enter Gensokyo in her dreams, so she basically nodded off on page 9 and ended up in Mokou's house. Maribel's ability to time travel at the end seems to be unique to this doujin, presumably powered by her desire to have sex with Renko.

Can't believe that liking women disrupted the timeline.

Well she vanished so i guess it kinda did xD hilarious though~ and good

pg 14, "it was joke"

it was a joke

pg 27, "compeltely"

completely

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What is the relationship between Mokou and Sumireko? Besides Mokou eating one of her doves.

Can't believe that liking women disrupted the timeline.

Ask Homura about it.

I really have no idea what's going on here. Mokou is in the real world? That woman is Renko's ancestor, so what's she doing around Renko? What's the background here?

Seems that the author interpreted Sumireko to be Renko's ancestor, since her title is "The Secret Sealing club's First President". Sumireko is the character introduced in Urban Legend in Limbo, who came to Gensokyo from the outside world. Maribel and Renko are apparently dating. Sumireko fell in love with Mokou, which means she won't have a child, causing Renko to disappear from the timeline. Maribel seems like she came over to convince Sumireko to have children.

Pretty much this, but a few other points. Sumireko and Renko share the same surname, so it's not too much a stretch that she'd be Renko's ancestor. Also, Sumireko can enter Gensokyo in her dreams, so she basically nodded off on page 9 and ended up in Mokou's house. Maribel's ability to time travel at the end seems to be unique to this doujin, presumably powered by her desire to have sex with Renko.

Lol - Ok so - it's complicated. I was gonna say I've got not clue what is going on and I thought I knew touhou pretty well!
I'ts got multiple times and places crossing and swapping dimensions in dreams lol? And I don't recall seeing Sumireko before. But I liked her character. Does she actually physically move to gensokyo when she dreams of it? Otherwise someone there couldn't interact with her physically. Can she stay as long as she wants? Was she dreaming herself into their cupboard across time too?

I think the author could of done a much better job explaining things - I feel only a small niche of even touhou fans will not be confused.

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Ty Sanae

Lol - Ok so - it's complicated. I was gonna say I've got not clue what is going on and I thought I knew touhou pretty well!
I'ts got multiple times and places crossing and swapping dimensions in dreams lol? And I don't recall seeing Sumireko before. But I liked her character. Does she actually physically move to gensokyo when she dreams of it? Otherwise someone there couldn't interact with her physically. Can she stay as long as she wants? Was she dreaming herself into their cupboard across time too?

I think the author could of done a much better job explaining things - I feel only a small niche of even touhou fans will not be confused.

Sumireko was introduced in the last fighting game, and she really hasn't been given much attention by the fans. I always figured that when Sumireko or Maribel go into dreams, it's like a Nightmare on Elm Street thing where whatever happens to them there transfers to real life. And I think she can only stay there as long as she's dreaming. Though I don't think she's been given time-traveling powers in canon, she is a powerful psychic who can at least teleport, so that might have been made up to get some sexy time in — plus a nice way to show her in the closet.

I've always found reading Touhou doujin to be a learning experience. At least a quarter of the things I've read made me go consult the wiki. The world and characters are fun, though, so after learning my first 30 or 40 characters, going to the wiki to try to see what's happening became more a bonus than a chore.

I can't really decide if the ending is hilarious or sad.

I wonder if Renko is now immune to fire...

Lol - Ok so - it's complicated. I was gonna say I've got not clue what is going on and I thought I knew touhou pretty well!
I'ts got multiple times and places crossing and swapping dimensions in dreams lol? And I don't recall seeing Sumireko before. But I liked her character. Does she actually physically move to gensokyo when she dreams of it? Otherwise someone there couldn't interact with her physically. Can she stay as long as she wants? Was she dreaming herself into their cupboard across time too?

I haven't played the fighting games, but for what I can recall from comments, she could physically move between the boundary at first, until her scenario, in which she gets trapped inside Gensokyo with no way out, and a lot of things there apparently thought she was food. Then she manages to return to the real world (or more like, they send her away) but is no longer able to physically return to Gensokyo... but, apparently, she's still able to visit it in her dreams as an atral projection.

It's interesting that her last name links her to Renko, yet her actual powers are more akin to those of Mary.

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Though I don't think she's been given time-traveling powers in canon, she is a powerful psychic who can at least teleport, so that might have been made up to get some sexy time in — plus a nice way to show her in the closet.

I've always found reading Touhou doujin to be a learning experience. At least a quarter of the things I've read made me go consult the wiki. The world and characters are fun, though, so after learning my first 30 or 40 characters, going to the wiki to try to see what's happening became more a bonus than a chore.

Yeah, the amount of lore, both canon and fanon, in touhou is incredible.

Sumireko does meet with Mokou in ULiL, so there's something in canon that supports them meeting up and making out. Since Maribel is highly implied to be Yukari it's also not a far fetch to see her jumping through space and time. The only thing that's iffy is the closet in the beginning, but that scene is pretty exciting so let's just roll with it lol.

It's interesting that her last name links her to Renko, yet her actual powers are more akin to those of Mary.

Sumireko's powers aren't much akin to Merry's... She's more of a generic psychic-type 2hu while Maribel's powers centre around boundaries. For instance, Sumireko could only get into Gensokyo when using the Occult Balls to augment her powers while Merry can do it just by training her natural abilities. Then again, Sumireko's more like Merry than Renko given that Renko's basically a portable GPS clock.

Yeah, the amount of lore, both canon and fanon, in touhou is incredible.

Sumireko does meet with Mokou in ULiL, so there's something in canon that supports them meeting up and making out. Since Maribel is highly implied to be Yukari it's also not a far fetch to see her jumping through space and time. The only thing that's iffy is the closet in the beginning, but that scene is pretty exciting so let's just roll with it lol.

When Sumireko and Mokou met during ULiL, they became quick friends, and many (not just yuri fans) interpret the interaction as Sumireko's developing a crush on Mokou. I really don't think the ending's supposed to make sense alongside canon abilities...

It's interesting that her last name links her to Renko, yet her actual powers are more akin to those of Mary.

Obviously, this doujin got their relation wrong - Sumireko is the descendent of Maribel and Renko instead! :P

Sex with Glasses, we need a tag for this.

That ending killed me.

It's interesting that her last name links her to Renko, yet her actual powers are more akin to those of Mary.

Obviously, this doujin got their relation wrong - Sumireko is the descendent of Maribel and Renko instead! :P

Maybe that's how Sanae's miracle solved the problem.

I just realized the hilarious irony of Renko accidentally making her ancestor so gay that she retconned herself out of existence.

The girl with glasses looks like Maki to me

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Wait, if Sanae did something, would that make Renko Mokou's descendant too?

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