Wtf...

Of all things she's worried about, she's worried about her partner farting?!
Eh, fair enough

I got excited for nothing :{

lol, this was cute and funny

Wat

Thanks for this, it was different. But a good different! I liked it.

This was cute and funny great work!

It says a lot about the writing on the series when even one shot characters (and arguably the most fetishistic of the bunch) have engaging relationships with each other.

Excellent

Cute~~~

Oh hey it's the one that Vankomycin shared in the forums.

Re-reading it, this is really cute.

Whoa. Seeing this pop up in the forum thread listing was kind of a rush.

I got excited for nothing :{

How can I make it up to you?

I was in it for the kinks, more bdsm! More hand holding! None of this sweet lovey dovey crap
Lol no I was just lurking for bdsm, pay no mind

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It would be great if even half the smut authors had characters this interesting. Hell I'll even take 1/4

"I got all night, slave. I just drank coffee."

edgy

I was in it for the kinks, more bdsm! More hand holding! None of this sweet lovey dovey crap
Lol no I was just lurking for bdsm, pay no mind

BDSM is equal parts bondage and lovedovey crap if you're with a sub you are in a relationship with.
Source: Am a Mistress myself.

I was wrong not exactly the bdsm then, but the sadistic side of it

"I got all night, slave. I just drank coffee."

edgy

inb4 she has to keep using the bathroom

Didn't think it would turn out like this. Cute and funny :)

I was wrong not exactly the bdsm then, but the sadistic side of it

Maybe this then?

Murmurs in the Background - One-Upmanship

More hand holding!

Whoa whoa whoa. What kind of filthy pervert do you take me for?

@Vankomycin
This was not what I was expecting when you said you were working on a bdsm story, lmao. Never the less, cute kissing scenes may just be my number 1 fetish.

@Ropponmatsu

I was wondering when you would show up! I was hoping you would see this. What with us being BDSM Pals and all.

Just out of idle curiosity, though, would you be interested in doing a sort of a reverse translation? Translating it into Japanese? I have saved a copy of the raws with no dialogue or speech balloons. Very clean.

It is probably just me, but I have very mixed feelings about it. I like the idea but either it is too short or too long. Like I get the joke, but because set up for it is so long and then once she sniffs and we know where it will go, we have entire conversation before the "punch line" lands and then they still talk some more, it feels a bit dragged on and feels like it would work better as quick, few panels joke. The way it is right now it feels like a set up to serious bdsm story which then suddenly turns into more light hearted one and either forsake the bdsm theme entirely or continue it with more playful tone. Basically it feels more like first few pages of doujin with rest of them missing, which puts bummer on reader (me), because I want it to continue. Take it as you will.

BTW. "I just drank coffee" will become best quote ever xD

I do always appreciate it when people actually end up laughing during sexytimes. To me, it's a sign of great intimacy.

@Vankomycin
I could do that, since it's so short. =]
Outside of the forums, you can contact me at

Wow, is this actually BDSM? In a hentai? What?

I approve!