Still think the chapter 1 was much better than chapter 2. Too many awesome dialogue in it.
The 'get found out that I am gay, and find out that my sister gay, double shock'. 'I won't show them (your flirty chat) to mom'.
Then we have the 'very super duper ultra mutual understanding'. But certainly it can't top the 'where do you want to go?The hotel' 'Bah we can't do that so sudden'. ' We can do it last then', '..if the mood is right'. Then boom, the mood is right