???????but what redeeming qualities do kuruchi have that would make star student rinchan want to marry her right away??????? strange yuri manga logic

Kinda cute, but I feel like this reads as something that should have been multiple chapters instead of crammed into just one.

Spreading this out would have probably been better. The dynamic is cute, but definitely too much for just a short oneshot.

and who said video game doesn't teach anything?

Very hentai-ish.

Wanking in the publicly accessible computer lab seems contra-indicated unless you're an exhibitionist.

I liked it, was cute and deliciously lewd :D

Kinda cute, but I feel like this reads as something that should have been multiple chapters instead of crammed into just one.

Couldn't agree more, it should have been about 3 or 4 chapters I feel.

This was cute and nice, but VERY disconnected.

How come you guys are taking this oneshot seriously? Lol

How come you guys are taking this oneshot seriously? Lol

Keeps us off the streets and out of trouble.

Loved it i hope there is more to come for these two.

I love that picture of the credits page <3 so lovely

Lol...and yeah that credits graphic matched up well with the story

Should have done the spiderman kiss, with how she was hanging upside down...
Or the spiderman 69.

Too short. Story felt rushed 'cause it was short. I do hope there is some kinda sequel.

Very hentai-ish.

Wanking in the publicly accessible computer lab seems contra-indicated unless you're an exhibitionist.

That was her bedroom not a public lab. Not denying the hentai vibe I got from it tho.

Was I the only person who approached this as a comedy?

Cringy af. Learn for nekomura or sekihara

Was I the only person who approached this as a comedy?

No, I also got a very whimsical, shonen-esque vibe from the story. The absurdity of Sourin's behavior was definitely played for humor.

I agree with the other assessments here: it felt like the author was missing a lot of steps in the plot and just rushing to the sex. Very porn-y.

Which is a shame, because the story has a lot of yuri elements and tropes I enjoy, but they aren't as put together as I'd have liked.

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Even though it was kind of rushed, I have to admit it was hella cute

felt very... old school-ish with the nonsensical tone and how fast things happened...

???????but what redeeming qualities do kuruchi have that would make star student rinchan want to marry her right away??????? strange yuri manga logic
I second you on that...I mean she's just your typical plain girl, even more so she seems like a coward. Then again maybe this is just one pure hentai manga, no logic needed.

I don't know how i feel about this. :S

Well it was fairly amusing, even with all the hentai logic. I kind of feel the picture on the credits page is better than this entire one-shot though.

At first I thought Todoroki would be an alien who tries to fit into human society. (Doesn't know computers, has remarkable physical traits, learns social behavior from ecchi games)

Still nice overall.

Hahaha computers are really amazing