Somehow, the first half of this story was extremely hard to follow... :/

Ugh. I don't know how I feel about this.

There really should be a tag for these kind of ending's ffs.

last edited at Jan 7, 2017 4:16PM

Would this be angst?

well.... it started nice?

Very unclear.

so basically cool and aloof mc befriended unpopular girl, changed her looks and character, so the latter suddenly had guys swarming over her, but only because she changed so much. mc hoped the 'ugly betty' would choose her in the end, but the other girl played 'b-but we are both girls!' trump card. the ending indicates that mc probably went through similar shit a few times earlier.

interesting ending, i don't recall seeing it anywhere before.

^ I agree

Eeeeh....I thought she was cuter before, with the glasses and messy hair :/

So in a way, Flowers Forming a Parabola, but harder to follow and with just a frisson of "girls can't love girls".

Well, that sure was a lot of fun to read.

Page 6 : "Je vais envoyer bouquet pour vous demain également" Japanese speaking french is hilarious. Even more with their accent, having in mind Nodame Cantabile, when they're in Paris. The oneshot itself was decent, I like this author.

There really should be a tag for these kind of ending's ffs.

Agree.

but i think maybe we can use a het tag for this one.

last edited at Jan 8, 2017 4:52AM

.......Okay

Utoptia posted:

Page 6 : "Je vais envoyer bouquet pour vous demain également" Japanese speaking french is hilarious. Even more with their accent, having in mind Nodame Cantabile, when they're in Paris. The oneshot itself was decent, I like this author.

Having in mind Maria-sama ga miteru and Strawberry Panic.

The fake french accent of the seiyuus is hilarious.

So in a way, Flowers Forming a Parabola, but harder to follow and with just a frisson of "girls can't love girls".

Thank you, I knew I had read basically the same story before.

last edited at Jan 8, 2017 9:10AM

This isn't the end, right? o__O?

Damn gurl♪(´ε｀ )

Ok I don't like the ending and I didn't like the 'But you're a girl' part.

Hearing the 'french' language in dramas is funny but also weird when you don't understand what they are saying without looking at the subtitles XD

(Yes I was also thinking of Nodame Cantabile but it's not the only one where I don't understand my own language ^^')

Ok I don't like the ending and I didn't like the 'But you're a girl' part.

Hearing the 'french' language in dramas is funny but also weird when you don't understand what they are saying without looking at the subtitles XD

(Yes I was also thinking of Nodame Cantabile but it's not the only one where I don't understand my own language ^^')

So that's mean you're french too ? :D

The fake french accent of the seiyuus is hilarious.

It totally is, whether they speak french or english it gets funny really quick. When Alexander Anderson from Hellsing Ultimate starts to speak english it's hilarious too ^^

Hearing the 'french' language in dramas is funny but also weird when you don't understand what they are saying without looking at the subtitles XD

(Yes I was also thinking of Nodame Cantabile but it's not the only one where I don't understand my own language ^^')

Je ne suis pas d'accord, dans cette [excellente] scène on comprend ce qu'ils disent même si ils nous font un peu passer pour des cons en prenant un accent aussi ridicule xD.

last edited at Jan 9, 2017 12:46PM

God the beginning had me confused. Only halfway through did I get a hint of what was going on so I had to turn back and re-read to understand what that beginning was.

But besides that nasty lil' doujin, not a nice aftertaste at all.
Still appreciate the upload though.

last edited at Jan 9, 2017 8:57PM

So in a way, Flowers Forming a Parabola, but harder to follow and with just a frisson of "girls can't love girls".

It's more like she kissed her for the sake of practise and even that didn't waive her.

five months later, has anyone noticed that page 5 is upside-down?

Wouldn't this be a yuri crush tag and not yuri because the other girl doesn't feel the same way?