Yeah, I also found it to be quite rapey, even though the rest would have been quite nice

Even though she said she's going to rape me, we're both girls, so it's not a bit deal, right...?

completely killed it for me. Still enjoyed the art though...

The manga is true to the title xD
Also yeah,

Feel like I'm just reading both Asagi Ryuu's work and Mira's work at the same time...

I think it's the boobs that reminds me of Mira.

The last page too "Aren't you supposed to be a girl" that makes no sense is actually "You weren't a virgin, right?"

I remember this from Valkyrie Drive. Shoujo can mean virgin as well as girl, IIRC. Speaking of Valkyrie Drive, that blondie reminded me of Mirei, just with a polar opposite personality, of course.

Oh, and looking back, those uniforms hid their big breasts pretty damn well.

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Lmao, that was fun

h3x posted:

^ Well someone checked this on /u/ and:
"This is completely wrong. The correct translation is "It's because I made you feel bad about it, it's the same thing your ex did".

Oh, my bad. I was in hurry so I only focused on ex-boyfriend part, but she indeed only says she did the same thing to Maria as Maria's ex-boyfriend, not that same thing happened to her. Now that I think about it, chances Saika would have exactly the same experience with her ex-boy would be extremely low. I guess I wasn't really paying that much attention to it, but can you blame me ;x?

Mayjaplaya posted:

The last page too "Aren't you supposed to be a girl" that makes no sense is actually "You weren't a virgin, right?"

I remember this from Valkyrie Drive. Shoujo can mean virgin as well as girl, IIRC.

It is actually a bit more complicated.

少女 shoujo means little girl, sometimes also just girl or teen, depending on context, in general someone still in puberty.
処女 shojo means virgin
Tokonome's name was written the same way shojo was but the reading of kanji was Tokonome, but because shojo was the natural way anyone would read it at first, they kept misreading it as shojo.

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PRANK GONE SEXUAL!

When "It's just a prank, bro!" goes horribly wrongdeliciously right.

Fix'd.

This is totally the best! completely perverted but cute too!
(I saw a mention of the "rape but then its ok" thing, honestly I read all the talk as like s&m/role play type situation especially when she passionately succumbs with an "okay <3"

Fixed the mistranslations on 15 & 32 and made 22 sound better cuz it was bugging me. Also, it seems there was some confusion about who was saying "Okay" on pg 7, so I added a question mark to clarify that it's Saika, not Maria consenting. Sorry to anyone looking for a way out of rape, but this hentai uses the trope of rape turning vanilla, as unrealistic as it actually is.

Feel like I'm just reading both Asagi Ryuu's work and Mira's work at the same time...

That's what I thought too

This one was.... I don't ever know how to describe it. So porn, so yandere, so sweet in the end...
I don't know. It's ok if its end ok, I suppose? xD

But... I liked it. :3

Well that was a lot of wetness.... Like.

Speaking of Valkyrie Drive, that blondie reminded me of Mirei, just with a polar opposite personality, of course.

Yes! The blonde in this totally reminds me of how Mira draws Mirei. Could not figure out who she reminded me of and it bothered me the whole way through.

maybe people should look into making a dubcon (dubious consent) tag?

maybe people should look into making a dubcon (dubious consent) tag?

There is an ongoing discussion on this subject.

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I loved it

Interesting, i love the style of the artist
Also, love all the comments

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Speaking of Valkyrie Drive, that blondie reminded me of Mirei, just with a polar opposite personality, of course.

Yes! The blonde in this totally reminds me of how Mira draws Mirei. Could not figure out who she reminded me of and it bothered me the whole way through.

Ayanero is actually a Valkyrie Drive fan (she has fanart of it in her twitter) so the similarities might be intentional.

As for the story itself, I love it. Great art, hilarious humor and a heartwarming ending. Just great stuff all around.

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Feel like I'm just reading both Asagi Ryuu's work and Mira's work at the same time...

That's what I thought too

me too but i think mira s work has less detail and less water

me too but i think mira s work has less detail and less water

Does it ?

not a word about my censorship

Being peed on sounds.. lovely

that ain't pee, that's squirt ;)

Being peed on sounds.. lovely

that ain't pee, that's squirt ;)

http://moonoverjune.com/go/52

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Also, it seems there was some confusion about who was saying "Okay" on pg 7, so I added a question mark to clarify that it's Saika, not Maria consenting.

What! Why? ...ugh, there goes the awesome s&m feelz I got reading this....Saika would make an awesome dom, and Maria is such a slutty sub

This gets an A+++++++++ from me. Every time I turned the page I kept thinking "this is too good to be true. The story is gonna bull crap us at the end and say one or both girls still don't love each other."
But I was totally wrong (for once) and got a legitimate yuri story beginning to end.

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