The art looks like someone who learned how sex and bodies work from hentai, which in turn cribbed off other hentai, and so on, and at no point did anyone involved look at real bodies or even live-action porn.
Forever perpetuating the standard of bad.
It's hentai all the way down.
well, not too surprised given this oneshot is also on e-hentai. what sucks is that a good majority of yuri hentai falls into the trappings of bad or really bad hentai (ok, most hentai falls into those categories). sometimes it's forgivable if the story is half-good or if the art is amazing. for this oneshot, a case could be made that it falls into the so-so category, where it is not really bad, but not terribly good.