Fluffy...?

Between this and Transient Dreams of Transient Things by Tamamusi, I think I like the gay-for-pay but becoming a real romance....genre?

But I do like this artstyle, it feels very..rustic?

I'm torn. Hate the art, love the story, but it's way too rushed. I'm sure there's some sort of understanding with certain types of stories that the reader with be able to fill in the "due to certain circumstances" on their own and just go straight into the sex/foot massaging/oil lapping ... erm ... whatever that was. My preference is to see the backstory, so this sort of story that teases at potential kind of annoys me.

Maybe it's because I write romance for a living; I want to see what someone /else/ came up with once in a while. With stories like this, I'll spend the next two days writing the pre/post story in my head. That's probably 'working as intended' but I can't help feeling cheated lol

I would read more by this artist/author. Good pacing, given the brevity, enough setting to keep it from being a jump-in-bed story, still hate the art.

I shouldn't read these within three hours of my writing critique group, huh.

Edit: I also don't get the name. I expected the rich girl to be the sub for some reason. Oh well.

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I liked the main character, surprisingly enough. Maybe it's just because she's a masochist and so unabashed about it...? I dunno.

Finally, a story where a girl becomes a whore and everything goes perfectly fine for once.

Love the art, hate the story. I'm so sick of child prostitution, of any prostitution, it makes me want to vomit.

So far, I think this needs another part for a proper closure. It's way too rushed IMO.

Loved the art, loved the reversal.

The beginning was interesting but it kind of catches me off guard during the transition from the middle to the ending. What was that about? I see that frown on Kotoko's face and I frown as well. what the heck ending is this?

there's an interesting core for a story there but i feel like it would've benefited immensely from having a couple of chapters instead of being a one-shot.

I liked the agency owner who totally was in the wrong business.

This art somehow reminded me of Gundam-Ecole du ciel for some really odd reason. I have no idea why.

There definitely needs to be a continuation of this. It felt way too rushed towards the end.

Rich girl looks a bit odd as well.

I need more S&M play!!!! Good concept for story, execution needs work, more pages required!

Love the art, hate the story. I'm so sick of child prostitution, of any prostitution, it makes me want to vomit.

Well, she was 18 when the story started so its technically not child prostitution. As for prostitution on itself, it isn't that bad of a gig if you can make sure that all the parties involved are consenting adults that know what they are getting into.

well this looks like it's going to be fun!

Should have been written ITS FUCK TIME at credits :D

Oh God, I'd love to see more of this, the sumptuous privilege of being the sole vessel for a 'nice' girl's hidden darkness, the depths of intimacy, where she trusts you with extremes for which others would reject her, but you have the power to be her salvation, and when she degrades with you with payment, and visibly hates herself, she's utterly vulnerable.

Kotoko's got a strange, awkward appeal as a top. She's flailing enough that her cruelty feels like an involuntary compulsion that she's struggling to channel or withhold, rather than a controlled process tailored for her pleasure. Her sadism is more powerful than her, which is hot as hell. She likely wants to be punished for it on some level, if her tears and ironically masochistic obsession are anything to go by, which opens her to up to the whole spectrum of...

Ahem. Enough lechery, my true colours are showing.

The mangaka's other one-shot is good as well. I'm keeping an eye out for this one.

O my gawd, that was sooooooo cute!

I'm fine with being your slave. If you've got the money for it.

Happy end.

Sadly, the author's next work is darker and guess what, she got raped forcefully by men at night (that's the truth). The ending is bad. You can check it in yuri project. I'll choose to abandon it.

I aint buying that ending.

Sadly, the author's next work is darker and guess what, she got raped forcefully by men at night (that's the truth). The ending is bad. You can check it in yuri project. I'll choose to abandon it.

I guess some congratulations are in order, since you succesfully baited me into looking. WP.

[...] and finally get to do their tribalism the right way.

They do... what? Sorry, couldn't resist.

Sadly, the author's next work is darker and guess what, she got raped forcefully by men at night (that's the truth). The ending is bad. You can check it in yuri project. I'll choose to abandon it.

I guess some congratulations are in order, since you succesfully baited me into looking. WP.

So it's not true?? I deleted my comment because I thought it was false hope. It's not true right? I can't find the sequel in question.

[...] and finally get to do their tribalism the right way.

They do... what? Sorry, couldn't resist.

=))) I meant "tribadism". But hey, there are tribes with lesbian rituals, right?

Sadly, the author's next work is darker and guess what, she got raped forcefully by men at night (that's the truth). The ending is bad. You can check it in yuri project. I'll choose to abandon it.

I guess some congratulations are in order, since you succesfully baited me into looking. WP.

So it's not true?? I deleted my comment because I thought it was false hope. It's not true right? I can't find the sequel in question.

Judge for yourself. Here's an easy link for the raw.