Uuuhhh... Both fell in love with each other, one wanted to go all the way suddenly but PERIOD ISSUE refrained them, in the end they did do it.... They kinda went a lil fast with all those emotions and arousal right..n? But i still LOVE it cuz YURI LOVE FOREVER >~<

Characters did not get the chance to grow nor develop.
Pretty weak for a plot that could've been more.
Abrupt ending.

Unsatisfying, shame, it had potential.

This would've been better as a one-shot, tbh. Would've not fixed it, but it wouldn't feel like such a lost potential.

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Lol okay that was a fucking weird series....thought this would have more chapters but ok.

Would like more character development BUT OK

Fin? What the fudge? I wanted more out of this one =[

It's fairly easy to extrapolate on that chapter and see that it probably ended up alright eventually but I can't help but feel that it really needed at least one more chapter to end things on a more solid note. It ends up feeling like it was wrapping things up then the author just decided that was enough randomly.

Kuroneko's character was my favourite. The way she stood against everyone, without even holding grudge or becoming agressive really inspired me.
My favourite part was when she heard Shiina say they were not friends. In any other manga, Kuroneko would just have left in tears and then take her distance from Shiina. But instead Kuroneko told everyone she kissed her. Kuroneko really is a wonderful human being.
Shiina was a realistic character, although she doesn't have a strong will like Kuroneko, she tries her best to be honest and I really liked the fact Shiina took the initiative of the first kiss.

Perfect series for me. I don't mind it ending up so quickly, the message of the author was properly conveyed. Who really cares if the two have to struggle in the future, or even worse, if Shiina fails in the end to overcome the difficulties and parts ways with Kuroneko? Both of them already learned a lot from this experience.

Same. Also, i can relate to some of the problems she have faced.

Yeah, this felt like there should have been another 20 pages or so

Jesus Christ this chapter was completely all over the place, the sudden ending was just the icing on the cake

Fin means End. The story is completed, sadly ;-;
Would have liked to see Shiina grow

Except that Fin is often used in manga to mean the end of a chapter, which we've already seen in a few series. It might mean End here, but you can't really count on that.

Ya, mangaka use Fin to mark end of chapters and end of manga, however, this one, if you read the table of contents, is over. there are 2 chapters of Cocytus and 3 chapters of Moratorium. I believe Moratorium is a different story.

Edit: Yeah, just read the raws for Moratorium. It's a different couple, and yeah, it's typical Kodama Naoko, but I THINK it ends kinda happy... I'm not quite sure, tbqh

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... I enjoyed this. Ending included.

That was an abrupt end to it, feels like it should have a third part to wrap things up properly. We don't even really have Shiino's answer to the confession.

Interesting story, though.

I think we all know what her answer is. And I think Shiina felt guilty because she would like to be as strong as Kuroneko, but she isn't. That's why she want to cry, from guilt... and from happines. Even if Shiina is such a coward Kuroneko still loves her.

I think that's a super important point actually. Kuroneko saw how Shiina got cold feet and went full coward on her, and still is able to love her completely. I think in the future, Shiina'd need to be helped along by Kuroneko, but I think the potential is there.

Yet. It is obvious she will overcome the social stigma in time. After all, she is not in some internet forum but in the 'real world'. It isn't easy to do something that will make you an outcast at your school, even if it is the right thing to do.

She slipped up once, and she very may well slip up again. But if Kuroneko can take it and move onward, and Shiina was able readily at least partially apologize for it, there's a lot more hope for their future.

Overall I'm content with this. It doesn't try to be anything more than the twoshot illuminating the difficulties of social pressure on relationships, and it does a fabulous job at that. Could it be more? Of course. Nisekoi started as a good oneshot that someone somewhere with power decided it could be made into something far more expansive. But the oneshot itself is very good sovereign for what box it fits itself under.

fin
Wait. What.

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that was a quarter-assed ending yo. not pleased if it just ends like that.

Why does it say "completed"?

Cos that's it..I think that's the end of the whole thing

:/

Yeah. That's it.

The end. I'm glad someone translated the last chapter, so everyone can see how it ended. I bought the tank for this hoping for an extra chapter for a better closure, but there weren't any.

Moratorium is a better story, out of Kodama's stories, Moratorium may have the best ending out of all of them.

Just like Shiina's last words.

"Why do I feel like crying?" explains everyone's reactions to this ending.

Really sad to see this story completed. I've mixed feeling cus it end while it at the climax of the story. It ended so suddenly.
Hope to see continue in future cus want to see development both girls.
How they face other?
Will both of them keep it secret?
will she confess to kuroneko san?

well tbh even though this one ended quickly, I liked the story better than the authors "netsuzou trap" (I'm sorry if I spelled wrong), the story had potential for more chapters, but it is what it is.

Loved the story..
It's just...too short..
Want mooore ><"

What!? That's it!? That's the story!? Awwwww~! I wanted more~!

I personally liked this, but I also felt that it could've gone further in terms of... plot.

It's hard to understand why such an abrupt ending when the history was starting to move in a pretty interesting way.

Seriously, I'd definitely prefer all that work on Netsuzou Trap were put on this one instead.

At the end is ch 2 when she said she felt like crying was she happy or sad?

That was good. I give this points. All the points.
Wish it was longer though.

That's the real #Aaaaaangst

At the end is ch 2 when she said she felt like crying was she happy or sad?

It could be interpreted in both ways - though it seems that Shina feels more sad than happy.

Happy that she isn't the only one feeling something for Kuroneko and that both parties have mutual feelings for each other.
Sad that even though her love is fulfilled, they can't go on because Shina knows that her "friendship" would be cut off if she were to enter into a relationship with Kuroneko OR they'd have to keep their relationship a secret (which most likely Kuroneko wouldn't oblige to do from how she's portrayed in this manga - given the fact that she lashed out after telling everyone that she and Shina would have went all the way if it weren't for their periods).

Shina would have to choose between her relationship with Kuroneko or her social standing with her classmates. Either way, she loses out in something.

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