When can i see megane gurl without those glasses...? XD

You will see... few times. Don't worry :>

That was AWESOME

I Want moooooore xD

Here is a list of minor mistakes or errors. Most of them are very minor.

I'll let you guys decide whether you want to fix them. :3

 
http://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/lily_love_ch01#5
a ladies'
a lady's

http://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/lily_love_ch01#9
a women
a woman

http://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/lily_love_ch02#8
recieved
received
Note: I before E except after C

http://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/lily_love_ch02#8
to just chose someone
to just choose someone

http://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/lily_love_ch02#9
alot of
a lot of

http://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/lily_love_ch02#9
If it's not about someone else or some celebrity. it's about the boys they like.
If it's not about someone else or some celebrity. It's about the boys they like.
Note:
Unlike most of the other bubbles which are in uppercase, this bubble is in mixed case.

http://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/lily_love_ch03#2
the passed winters
the past winters
Note: Not sure about this one. I suppose it could technically be "the winters that have passed" or "the winters that we have passed". But if it meant the winters in the past, then it should be "the past winters".

http://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/lily_love_ch03#11
my bachelors
my bachelor's
Note: "A bachelor's" is short for "a bachelor's degree", so it should retain the apostrophe. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bachelor%27s_degree

http://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/lily_love_ch03#11
I can find work easy
I can find work easily
Note: Although perhaps this was done on purpose as informal language.

http://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/lily_love_ch03#12
Of course, during this time... (next bubble) is mainly spent watching the countdown with a lover, right?
Of course, this time... (next bubble) is mainly spent watching the countdown with a lover, right?

http://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/lily_love_ch03#16
Let's countdown
Let's count down
Note: As a verb, it's "a countdown", but as a verb, it should be "to count down".

http://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/lily_love_ch03#17
Story & Illusted
Story & Illustrated

http://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/lily_love_ch04#2
And the sweetest words whispering into my ear
And the sweetest words whispered into my ear
Note: Not totally sure about this. But "whispered" seems to make more sense. A person whispers words. Words are whispered (by a person).

http://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/lily_love_ch04#6
Chaing Mai
Chiang Mai
Note: This is in the TN on the left as well as on the T-shirt.

http://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/lily_love_ch04#10
Who's room?
Whose room?

http://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/lily_love_ch05#15
As long as person is nice
As long as the person is nice

http://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/lily_love_ch05#15
if it's man or woman
if it's a man or woman

http://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/lily_love_ch06#3
Chaing Mai
Chiang Mai

http://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/lily_love_ch06#10
my heart beat speeds up
my heartbeat speeds up

 
The following are not really errors, more of a minor observation.

I noticed that British spellings were used up to and including Chapter 3, but then, it seems that starting in Chapter 4, American spellings were used?

Examples:
http://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/lily_love_ch02#5
neighbours
http://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/lily_love_ch02#7
http://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/lily_love_ch02#8
neighbour
http://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/lily_love_ch03#2
favourite

Then, from chapter 4 onward, the American spellings seem to be used across the board.

Examples:
http://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/lily_love_ch04#3
flavor
savor
http://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/lily_love_ch05#12
favorite
http://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/lily_love_ch05#17
apologize

Personally, I'm fine with both British or American spellings, but consistency would be good.

last edited at Jul 11, 2015 6:15PM

Anon

About British and American it's probably because Coco is using American (because she's native) and I was learning British from the beginning and honestly I don't really know which version is which sometimes because I also mix some words from American.

last edited at Jul 11, 2015 6:08PM

I hate to rush the artist or whoever is translating this but damn! This is awesome! More please! Can't wait for the next chapter. :3

Hahaha FINALLY A CONFESSION! NOSEBLEEDING INCLUSIVE! >////<

When can i see megane gurl without those glasses...? XD

Well, I can think of a situation where you usually don't wear your glasses because they get in.. the way. Huehuehue, ;-)

Lol even Mew's friend is open.

Lol even Mew's friend is open.

Yeah, is pretty awesome how supportive her friend is.

I like how the misunderstanding was cleared up so quickly. I tend to like the character more when they actually think about the problem and do something to solve it. And the supportive friends are nice too. I hope this stays one of those feel-good stories. The expressions and the art are great.

My only complaint would be the word bubbles sometimes have a confusing order. I wonder if it's just inexperience on the author/publisher's part or if it's deliberate. Or maybe Thai artists are just more relaxed about it in general. Either way, it's only a minor inconvenience and doesn't bring down my enjoyment of the story at all.

pkill -11 donut

Finally! XD

omfg page 13 im in love

When the chapter started:

I am pleased. And she has such nice friends too! :D

last edited at Jul 12, 2015 4:03AM

I hate to rush the artist or whoever is translating this but damn! This is awesome! More please! Can't wait for the next chapter. :3

Kibufu said she will start TN ch.7 at Monday. This time it can be faster because Coco decided to help her also with this (she has more free time now). So we will see :)

I want to read this sooo baaad too xD

Bloody donut! 6 chapters in and they are already together? Yay xD

Bloody donut! 6 chapters in and they are already together? Yay xD

Well, I really welcome this, especially since there's soo many manga where it takes ages for their relationship to progress even slightly..
Yes, I'm looking at you, Citrus and Fluttering Feelings. XD

Bloody donut! 6 chapters in and they are already together? Yay xD

Well, I really welcome this, especially since there's soo many manga where it takes ages for their relationship to progress even slightly..
Yes, I'm looking at you, Citrus and Fluttering Feelings. XD

To be fair though, it makes them better because it takes longer. lol. I do love the change of pace with this manga. :)

So cute <3

Bloody donut! 6 chapters in and they are already together? Yay xD

Well, I really welcome this, especially since there's soo many manga where it takes ages for their relationship to progress even slightly..
Yes, I'm looking at you, Citrus and Fluttering Feelings. XD

I quit Citrus as soon as it got too pseudo-incesty, too close to incest for me, I love the hair design for the main character though, it's very lively.

Fluttering Feelings is appealing in how it's a college story, but yes, it is very slow moving.

I really enjoy stories with older-than-high school characters that aren't entirely coming out stories. Relationships are more interesting than just deciding you're okay with being gay. And coming out is a life-long thing, not a one-time personal event.

confused1203

Bloody donut! 6 chapters in and they are already together? Yay xD

Well, I really welcome this, especially since there's soo many manga where it takes ages for their relationship to progress even slightly..
Yes, I'm looking at you, Citrus and Fluttering Feelings. XD

To be fair though, it makes them better because it takes longer. lol. I do love the change of pace with this manga. :)

It depends. If they get together after 100 chapter, unless quality of manga is really high, reader can easily get bored and drop it. Getting together fast doesn't automatically makes manga bad as well. I actually prefer when they start dating in first chapter or pretty fast, so rest of the manga can focus on their relationship. I don't mind reading about journey how they got to like each other, but too less manga focus on actual couple life so I'm delighted that Lily Love didn't decide to drag it 20+ chapters.

mccann

Relationships are more interesting than just deciding you're okay with being gay.

My thoughts exactly.

confused1203

Bloody donut! 6 chapters in and they are already together? Yay xD

Well, I really welcome this, especially since there's soo many manga where it takes ages for their relationship to progress even slightly..
Yes, I'm looking at you, Citrus and Fluttering Feelings. XD

To be fair though, it makes them better because it takes longer. lol. I do love the change of pace with this manga. :)

It depends. If they get together after 100 chapter, unless quality of manga is really high, reader can easily get bored and drop it. Getting together fast doesn't automatically makes manga bad as well. I actually prefer when they start dating in first chapter or pretty fast, so rest of the manga can focus on their relationship. I don't mind reading about journey how they got to like each other, but too less manga focus on actual couple life so I'm delighted that Lily Love didn't decide to drag it 20+ chapters.

mccann

Relationships are more interesting than just deciding you're okay with being gay.

My thoughts exactly.

Yeah, that's pretty much how I see it too. I don't mind it if it takes a while until a pairing gets together, it's only realistic. After all, you don't start dating someone you just barely met usually.
But there's some manga that make me want to yell out in frustration and Citrus has a track record of forced drama which bothers me lol.
Especially when you get the whole "one step forward, two steps back" feeling constantly.
Oh, but who am I kidding, I still love Citrus and its art style, and I'll be back for the next chapter xD

I also think that seeing how a relationship develops is more interesting than the whole getting together angsty phase, mostly because I can relate to it more I guess.
I mean, the whole "Oh my god I'm gay, how do I deal with it?" thing is okay, but I sometimes would like yuri where the drama doesn't stem from them being gay and in denial, but where we have relationship drama just like it would be in a het pairing. If that makes any sense lol.

Kurokanako

Oh, but who am I kidding, I still love Citrus and its art style, and I'll be back for the next chapter xD

Art is gorgeous, but forced drama still made me drop it. Sucks since it had so much potential.

I mean, the whole "Oh my god I'm gay, how do I deal with it?" thing is okay, but I sometimes would like yuri where the drama doesn't stem from them being gay and in denial, but where we have relationship drama just like it would be in a het pairing.

My soulmate T__T

If that makes any sense lol.

It does. It's something I'm complaining about for some time now. Why we can't just get some drama and problems related to being a couple, instead of being gay.

I have to admit that I don't really enjoy the kind of story where gay-character attack a not-gay-yet-character and bend them into gay. I prefer the stories where the characters stay side by side and slowly realized they love each other, the gay-character may be interested in the not-gay-yet-character or not, but don't acttack her because they don't want to bend a straight girl into gay.
I dropped Cirtus because of it's forced drama too.
Best stories to me is Sasameki Koto, Poor Poor Lips and Under one roof, Stretch is the second if it's count, Fluttering Feelings is a nice read too but it's going nowhere yet so I didn't count.

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1- is "anonymous" applying for an editing gig ? Lol

annnd...
2- my two fave categories of Yuri =
SoL school girl(preferably late high school)
SoL adult life
One provides the angsty transition of young love wether because its their first love or their first time loving a girl...(its an appreciation for that awkwardness before an actual relationship, and/or my obsession with un-requited love lol)
And the other provides my fave part which is a story of a relationship that goes on after their declaration of feelings, the day to day and dealing with things together <3

a bit off topic I know....
anyway thanks for jumping on the next ch to translate! cant wait to see if Mew has to provide mouth to mouth to save Donut from her yuri love induced anemia hahahaha ^_^