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Mostly%20sunny
joined Oct 26, 2016

Nothing fuels a good murder like jealousy. Time for the beast to awaken.

Pout2
joined Mar 7, 2017

that last chapter was really confusing, was the new girl the one with the crossbow or something?

Pout2
joined Mar 7, 2017

for as bad as most of it was, the ending really could have been worse.

i feel like Mochi had a hand in this somehow

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joined Sep 21, 2015

What a Mochi plot twist

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joined Jul 21, 2013

I think this needs an incest tag!

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joined Apr 15, 2013

I think this needs an incest tag!

Let's please not spoil the twist in the tags. Please. Like, really.

Anyways, this series was one hell of a mess. It didn't make a whole lot of sense and it left me feeling confused a lot, but happy ending I guess? Which is... good?

Untitled-1
joined Nov 14, 2016

Mochi would be proud.

The ending was a bit rushed, it could have been more satisfying, but at least it was a happy ending so I'm fine with it.

033
joined Sep 11, 2014

Such a shame they didn't kiss at the end (or ever, iirc). That said, the entire manga isn't that bad, but not very good either. At least it has a happy ending.

Midnightgunner
Gt00pn-odpc
joined Sep 30, 2017

Wow. This was really bad. Seriously... Just complete garbage that achieved absolutely nothing...

last edited at Oct 2, 2017 7:52PM

Soralaylaff
joined Oct 16, 2013

I think this is the first time I didnt like an incest end. Usually the characters don't care after they find out they're sisters, but I feel like Akane and You ended up actually focusing on a sisterly relationship instead of a romantic one. Pretty bummed.

The beginning had promise but it just got too rushed and dumb at the end.

Tag%20rock%20snake
joined Aug 16, 2014

That ending managed to be even more nonsensical than I had imagined

last edited at Oct 2, 2017 8:23PM

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joined Apr 27, 2014

... I liked this a lot at the beginning.... meh dat ending... I'm all for incest but there wasn't even some kisses or sex ,as expected! meh

Delinquint%20yuri
joined Sep 14, 2016

At the end, looking back on it, I can't help but think... This was kinda stupid, wasn't it?

The%20witch's%20house
joined Apr 9, 2015

At the end, looking back on it, I can't help but think... This was kinda stupid, wasn't it?

yeah

but eh yuri is yuri

Smug%20ass%20fuckgin%20zura
joined Dec 5, 2015

....yeah, okay, i give up on trying to defend this one. The moment they pulled out the whole "Y'all are sisters" I decided this is one yuri i can't stomach down...

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joined Apr 30, 2016

Love the art and the beginning
But this ending was stupid and rushed
Especially the epilogue

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joined Jun 23, 2017

I don't think the author knew where they wanted to go, or rather only them knew and they failed to convey most of it... Too bad. Still enjoyed it though!

Gay%20cum
joined Jul 16, 2013

This story is pretty bad and filled with plot holes.

09_lapis_lazuline
joined Aug 12, 2017

God that was awful. Especially the ending. Not only is the "Sisters" plot point come out of nowhere, but it turns it into a bizarre soap opera where I guess we're supposed to care about the actions of an absolutely terrible human being and completely change what we thought about literally all the major characters for no reason. They don't even explain the killing game, just this vague handwave of it being a government thing, as if A YEARLY KILLING GAME WITH MIDDLE SCHOOL GIRLS is supposed to be just ignored. By the end, it seems like no one even cared about the deaths, which makes the killing game itself utterly pointless.

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joined Jun 27, 2016

that was such a horrible ending wtf. It didn't even make sense but I was hoping for some kind of yuri at the end

09_lapis_lazuline
joined Aug 12, 2017

The bit that made me especially scratch my head is when they go "Only 1 minute left", indicating a whole week passed. Despite the amount of time passing being maybe a day.

Yurikosmaller2
joined May 28, 2011

This was rushed. Terrible story.

09_lapis_lazuline
joined Aug 12, 2017

This was, without a doubt, the worst Koroshirai I have ever seen, and probably the worst ever written. A complete waste in audience belief, narrative comprehension and emotional investment.

09_lapis_lazuline
joined Aug 12, 2017

New game, count the plot holes in this piece of shit!

09_lapis_lazuline
joined Aug 12, 2017

Added this to the So Bad It's Horrible page on TV Tropes.

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