Well, that wasn't much of a "translation" at all, huh? Haha.
I would agree that 'tanned' would probably be a bit more accurate/sensitive than potentially making a race out to be a fetish. On the other hand, before that comment, I didn't even notice the issue for it to be a big deal.
Overall, this oneshot was kinda 2lewd4me but I guess the ending did try to be somewhat interesting. The implication was that the long-haired girl transferred to another school and went away, right? Hence the video for the two to share some memories. I was overall not very fond of the art, though.