Sofar this is shaping up to be one of Hakamadas better stories, altough as she's usualy bad at endings i feel like i shouldn't judge it yet. But I still have to say that I quite like the simpleness of her art.

The story line is becoming very interesting O.o can't wait to see what the next chapter has in store for us :)
thank you for all the hard work and time you have put into this ^-^

you damn right

thanks yuri girl, this world needs more of you

Yes! More girls that sexually assault another girl.

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I kinda like the tone of Hakamada Mera story but the art work is a problem here i think.

The art work is always the problem.

Yuri girl, thanks a lot for your hardwork, looking forward for more =)) also thanks dynasty =)

this has become really interesting in a lot of ways..

is it just me or hikawa doesnt seem to refuse at first?

Art work is definitely a matter of preference. I like both Hakamada Mera's artwork and stories.

I had previously translated chapters one and two, but now I've got to translate the rest. So chapter three will probably be a bit slower coming out. I've read it, but I can't make a translation from that; my vocabulary is too small, especially when reading kanji characters.

...Now where did I put those dictionaries and references?... As if I weren't using (all six of) them during the first two chapters also.

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Art work is definitely a matter of preference.

sure it is,
i see there's a lot of people that dislike it, but i love it, not only because it's really quite unique, but very expressive too, perfect for the emotional of the stories.

i can wait, it's nice to know that i'll read this story to the end (and a morinaga's one-shot after this, probably)

I'm liking this story. Nice translation project, and I'm also excited that translator is picking up a morinaga shot :)

When I first some of Hakamada Mera work I wasn't to fond of the art, but I must say over the time I have taken a liken for it. I also feel like the author work gets better and better each time I read something new of Hakamada.

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Is this the first work of Hakamada's that contains smut? This series' content certainly makes it stand out a bit from her other stories. As I mentioned before, while I'm not always the biggest fan of Hakamada's art, I do like it here.

Thanks to Yuri Girl for the chapter, and I will be looking forward to the next parts of the story.

Thank you Yuri Girl for this lovely new chapter :D

Seeing Hakamada's doll faces in a smutty context makes me uncomfortable somehow.

yuri girl. ..saikou!!! lovely chapter :)

Seeing Hakamada's doll faces in a smutty context makes me uncomfortable somehow.

Like you're seeing something you shouldn't see right ? That makes it even more exciting.

Don't like "story within a story" stories, its really putting a dampener on this for me

Page 12: instead of 'certain' it spells 'curtain'. XD

page 97: "what I am able do". I think the sentence is either "What I am able to do" or "What I am able to". it sounds weird.

Don't like "story within a story" stories, its really putting a dampener on this for me

I actually think this particular story in a story really parallels the main one and enhances (my) understanding of the main plot.

I actually think this particular story in a story really parallels the main one and enhances (my) understanding of the main plot.

+1 idk how to explain it myself, but yep.. prolly coz it mirrors the thoughts of Hikawa?

Seeing Hakamada's doll faces in a smutty context makes me uncomfortable somehow.

this is one of the things i love of hakamada mera,

once more, thanks yuri girl

Your are very welcome. I hope I am able to continue doing this for some time.

Page 12: instead of 'certain' it spells 'curtain'. XD

page 97: "what I am able do". I think the sentence is either "What I am able to do" or "What I am able to". it sounds weird.

Ah, the perils of doing my own proof reading. I've been warned. It should be "What I am able to do." I'll either get a revision up at some point, or include corrected pages in the 4th chapter.

For some reson the request I made for the blackmail tag ended up in the synopsis place