One minor complaint in the tn - I would have proffered the Hiyori kanji in the back of the art book left in, with an English subscript - because how it was made it look a bit silly and didnt give a good impression of how it was meant to be assertive.
English letters / words dont lend themselves to being drawn big and bold - a single Kanji can be drawn as a work of art- but not really the Latin alphabet. Nobody would write their name that big in English.
One minor complaint in the tn - I would have proffered the Hiyori kanji in the back of the art book left in, with an English subscript - because how it was made it look a bit silly and didnt give a good impression of how it was meant to be assertive.
Yeah my bad, edited it to original hiragana. Attempted to write it myself but didn't really work either (and my handwriting sucks).
One minor complaint in the tn - I would have proffered the Hiyori kanji in the back of the art book left in, with an English subscript - because how it was made it look a bit silly and didnt give a good impression of how it was meant to be assertive.
Yeah my bad, edited it to original hiragana. Attempted to write it myself but didn't really work either (and my handwriting sucks).
Nothing to apologize for - thanks for all your work :) I just think the original hiragana looks better.
BTW how come she wrote her name in hiragana? Japanese usually write their name with kanji unless its not a traditional name as has no no Kanji - or they are very young i thought?
It’s funny there’s so much skinship yet no NSFW tag. Now that’s what I call forcing the reader to stay focused on the dialogue!!— nothing to distract the reader!