That was an interesting read, hope there is more from this artist in the furure!

You know seeing it was one part I though it was going to be rushed or unsatisfying but it was nice.

You know seeing it was one part I though it was going to be rushed or unsatisfying but it was nice.

It didn't feel rushed but I do think it could have benefited from some more fleshing out. It's still a lovely story but I would have liked to see a bit more of the development of their relationship.

"Write 'being loved by my family'" think my heart just broke.

That said, I would have liked to see how the characters get to know and love each other, it felt a bit lacking in that department

Man, the style is so pretty. Why don't we have more work from this author? Are they new?

There was missing something. It was ok I guess, but it felt too mawlish and predictable. Also the "familiy background story" felt more like a parody than heartbreaking. Maybe the next story is more convincing and thus better. :>

But maybe I compared it too much with "Misery" (Steven King), which had another direction.

That was... weird and disjointed, but I kinda liked it. I feel like the author had a lot more they wanted to show than they could reasonably fit into a short one-shot.

Still felt weird and shorter than it actually is, but it's a step up from the last one. And I still love this artist's artstyle.

That was sweet, I also like the art quite a bit

Such a lovely one-shot. It'd benefit from being longer, though.

This'd make an awesome school play to be honest.

dawwwwwww that was so sweet.

This author's one shots are so awkward and odd, not sure how I feel about them...

this is awesome story,
nd I never thought the pacing would be this good.

but still, it kinda sad for this to be only one shot..

love it! .....i just need at least one kiss scene

A yuri story where an adult actually acts like an adult most of the times? Well that's refreshing.

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I wonder what exactly the story is with the family. I guess she could be from an affair of her mother's, but why would she be allowed to live on the same property as them and use their money?

I wholeheartedly approve of this , please more

Interesting premise and lovely art. Satoko becoming jealous of her fictional self was really adorable.

Gives the feeling that it was rushed, i hope there is more of this in the future.

The beginning is a bit out of nowhere, but the conclusion is very touching and satisfying.

No, don't go. I'll show you what it's like to feel love.

Things are a bit abrupt but still sweet and heartwarming.

"Write 'being loved by my family'" think my heart just broke.

Yup, right in the feels.

That was bland. Lacked in depth and emotional aspect. Forgettable.