What is this,no thread created? I think DReader get sick of schoolgirl,haha........pls dont bully me.

Hm... Is there more? I want to see more.

Really? 6 pages?? What a tease! Is this what addiction feels like????

Nooooooo >< need more plsssss

Really? 6 pages?? What a tease! Is this what addiction feels like????

Six pages, one's the title, and another's completely white.

Hail to the queen you cute little puppy.

last edited at Sep 27, 2017 2:48AM

What is this,no thread created? I think DReader get sick of schoolgirl,haha........pls dont bully me.

I'm confused by the point of your comment, is there a joke I'm missing? This doujin was posted fairly recently and pretty late so that's the main reason why there probably wasn't a thread yet. I know some people are tired of "schoolgirl" but there are plenty of us that aren't tired of it, I simply didn't expect an upload so late into the day. You're entitled to your own opinion and it's fine if you're "sick" of the tag, but don't speak for the rest of us or at least me please. Also If you don't like "schoolgirl" I advise going to your profile and blacklisting the tag, afterwards go look for something that makes you happy and enjoy it. I'll be here enjoying my schoolgirl yuri stories because that's what makes me happy.

What is this,no thread created? I think DReader get sick of schoolgirl,haha........pls dont bully me.

I'm confused by the point of your comment, is there a joke I'm missing? This doujin was posted fairly recently and pretty late so that's the main reason why there probably wasn't a thread yet. I know some people are tired of "schoolgirl" but there are plenty of us that aren't tired of it, I simply didn't expect an upload so late into the day. You're entitled to your own opinion and it's fine if you're "sick" of the tag, but don't speak for the rest of us or at least me please. Also If you don't like "schoolgirl" I advise going to your profile and blacklisting the tag, afterwards go look for something that makes you happy and enjoy it. I'll be here enjoying my schoolgirl yuri stories because that's what makes me happy.

Easy Fluffy! They were just joking -v- (hence the "pls dont bully me").

I'm confused by the point of your comment, is there a joke I'm missing?

Hot damn there, FluffyCow
Yes, yes there is
Might have taken that just a bit more seriously than you should have

last edited at Sep 27, 2017 3:28AM

Too short~ :<

where is the rest

This is a nice introduction chapter for a series, can't wait to see more.

What do you mean "it's a one-shot"?

What happened to page 4?

The white page. :)

The white page triggered me... (´Д` ) i want more! I even know i have an addiction.. I have to read something or else i feel shitty as hell...

This was a really solid snapshot of a sort of situation I'm a bit too familiar with on both sides. I love things that are just a few pages, just long enough to establish a setting and to drop the reader into it.

Wow, what a bad translation!

Is page 4 meant to be blank? It kinda read like it missed a page.

Wow, what a bad translation!

What corrections would you suggest?

Are we sure this got uploaded properly? Seems very unfinished. Make her worry? Worry about what, we can't even know that? Also wtf you decide to kiss that girl and expect her to pay you back for it? There's so little context it boggles my mind.

Also FluffyCow, OP poster does not sound like s/he is sick of that tag, s/he was just saying maybe there are some that are. I'm thinking they meant that as an explanation to why this doujin is sorely incomplete?

last edited at Sep 27, 2017 10:40AM

Are we sure this got uploaded properly? Seems very unfinished. Make her worry? Worry about what, we can't even know that? Also wtf you decide to kiss that girl and expect her to pay you back for it? There's so little context it boggles my mind.

https://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=42025596
This chapter is complete. There are two more chapters, though:
https://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=44333014
https://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=44811005

Are we sure this got uploaded properly? Seems very unfinished. Make her worry? Worry about what, we can't even know that? Also wtf you decide to kiss that girl and expect her to pay you back for it? There's so little context it boggles my mind.

https://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=42025596
This chapter is complete. There are two more chapters, though:
https://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=44333014
https://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=44811005

Amen to that

what a bad thread

Cut it out with the dumb stuff pls

last edited at Sep 27, 2017 8:45PM

Aw, nothing says true love like co-dependence

Wow, what a bad translation!

What corrections would you suggest?

In page 1, fourth bubble, when the girl that arrived ask if the other girl was waiting for her, she says "だ だめだた?", you translated it as "R... Really?", when it should be translated as "Was it no good?" or something like this, and the other one reply "ううん", that it's a way to say "No", and you translated as "Y-Yes".

In page 2, the girl says "帰ろか", you translated it as "Are you going home?", when it should be "Let's go home", in the same page after the forehead kiss, the other girl says "こちがよかったなー なんて" while pointing to her mouth, you translated it as "That felt... nice... somehow" when it should be "I would prefer it was here... just joking".

You totally changed scenes context, you should do some corrections in this one.