Nevri posted:
Nya-chan posted:
Essentially, it skips the whole "falling in love" part
I don't see how skipping falling in love is bad.
Two words : character building. It's probably my personal preference, but in order to get invested in a story and its characters, I need to get a glimpse of what makes them original, what fleshes them out. I don't much care about characters that seem to be born yesterday.
Here, Morinaga does away with any background for her characters. They have been friends and roommates for a while, they both are working, one in a restaurant or something, the other from home (doing what? Who cares?). One fell in love with the other along the way. Okay, that's it.
The rest of their lives is a blank slate. It was also one of the thing that made Hana to Hina a bit boring.
At least, in Girlfriends, Akko and Mari had families, friends and hobbies. They weren't living disconnected from the world. I got attached to them.
This one doesn't seem to be about a couple learning to live together. It seems to be about drama and how, after some tortuous process, they will eventually hook up.
I hope what comes after fleshes out the characters, because I find them flat. I can't feel any empathy yet. Maybe it will get better in the following chapters.
Welp, time to re-read Girlfriends for the umpteenth time.