Question for the scanlators: are you sure this is the finished version? There are a lot of speech bubbles and SFX that have been cleaned and edited, but are still missing or blank in this. There's some pretty prominent examples, especially the last page where all the 3 of the final panels are blank, or page 7, which has all of them missing.

last edited at May 3, 2017 12:34PM

pg 16, "Renforcement" --> "Reinforcement"

Uh... ok. I got it that it's based on a RPG game but what.

There's something a little eerie about girls tongue kissing while making the ^_^ expression

Big boobies?
saved

I dunno. It felt... empty.

Needs more cuddling, 7/10

I dunno. It felt... empty.

Ditto. I figure it was just some nice faffing about, but...
Nothing fun really shines through here, and I'm not entirely blaming the dialogue.
In some cases, doesn't even need it :0
https://dynasty-scans.com/anthologies/pillow_talker

p5, panel 2: "Current location" and "House located around here" reversed

Too fl00f.

I like the art and I like the cuddling. Oh boy do I like the cuddling. I like the boobs too.

The flow, lack of context or weight for really anything, not that big a fan.

Question for the scanlators: are you sure this is the finished version? There are a lot of speech bubbles and SFX that have been cleaned and edited, but are still missing or blank in this. There's some pretty prominent examples, especially the last page where all the 3 of the final panels are blank, or page 7, which has all of them missing.

The translation I got only had these, if I get rest of the text translated I'll add the rest, which I apparently will due to a message I just received :X

There's something a little eerie about girls tongue kissing while making the ^_^ expression

Yeah, it got kind of terrifying after a while...

They're so happy! ^o^/

Is that milk coming out of her nipples?? If so where is the tag？(OvO)

Is that milk coming out of her nipples?? If so where is the tag？(OvO)

I'm not sure if she's oozing milk or if they just drooled a lot while kissing.

Question for the scanlators: are you sure this is the finished version? There are a lot of speech bubbles and SFX that have been cleaned and edited, but are still missing or blank in this. There's some pretty prominent examples, especially the last page where all the 3 of the final panels are blank, or page 7, which has all of them missing.

The translation I got only had these, if I get rest of the text translated I'll add the rest, which I apparently will due to a message I just received :X

The complete version is here: https://mega.nz/#!IAIXXS4a!0pfHgoxQ-NyzhsWmCjGGofTpMauzOn6r_Mqr8bHM9JE
Sorry for this and thanks to the anonymous who kindly translated the rest of the text :X

last edited at May 3, 2017 5:26PM

p5, panel 2: "Current location" and "House located around here" reversed

Nou, it's accurate. If you look at p3 where they are has a big treasure chest on the platform.

last edited at May 3, 2017 5:21PM

I've never clicked on something so fast and been so disappointed.

It was just fine. Cute, loving, and carefree. Saw this on Pixiv, where it was enjoyable enough already, but thank you for the translation, Motto Yuri.

last edited at May 3, 2017 11:35PM

Cute, simple, overly vague world-building. The fantasy setting seems to be a focus of this author's works, which makes me think there's more context out there that was lacking in this little story specifically.

Well, we all came for the boob cuddling and the boobs were well-drawn, if unexpectedly oozy. Perhaps though, in the future, they could wear sunglasses while they make-out, to prevent the nightmares.

Question for the scanlators: are you sure this is the finished version? There are a lot of speech bubbles and SFX that have been cleaned and edited, but are still missing or blank in this. There's some pretty prominent examples, especially the last page where all the 3 of the final panels are blank, or page 7, which has all of them missing.

The translation I got only had these, if I get rest of the text translated I'll add the rest, which I apparently will due to a message I just received :X

The complete version is here: https://mega.nz/#!IAIXXS4a!0pfHgoxQ-NyzhsWmCjGGofTpMauzOn6r_Mqr8bHM9JE
Sorry for this and thanks to the anonymous who kindly translated the rest of the text :X

http://i.imgur.com/BTJmb8F.png

looks like there was some sort of error during the editing and stuff,

looks like ragnarok online to me

Question for the scanlators: are you sure this is the finished version? There are a lot of speech bubbles and SFX that have been cleaned and edited, but are still missing or blank in this. There's some pretty prominent examples, especially the last page where all the 3 of the final panels are blank, or page 7, which has all of them missing.

The translation I got only had these, if I get rest of the text translated I'll add the rest, which I apparently will due to a message I just received :X

The complete version is here: https://mega.nz/#!IAIXXS4a!0pfHgoxQ-NyzhsWmCjGGofTpMauzOn6r_Mqr8bHM9JE
Sorry for this and thanks to the anonymous who kindly translated the rest of the text :X

http://i.imgur.com/BTJmb8F.png

looks like there was some sort of error during the editing and stuff,

Fixed by the editor.
https://mega.nz/#!MdRQlRIZ!ZaUEreSrYCLmDkIzN3B6vDVmS-U9VuR-SK7Sx5anVSY
Sorry for the trouble.