The transition of sex to not-sex at the end was a bit jarring, which is unusual for Celtrance. But I like how they handled K&S's personalities and designs alike.

Title is perfect for having a Celtrance manga pop up again.

It's very hard to have the main girls die at the end of a oneshot and have it feel completely sweet and heartwarming, no bitterness at all. Props to Celtrance for that.

I feel some of the background plot is slightly non-canonical but w/e. I didn't have a problem with it.

I saw the extra wide faces and thought hmm reminds me of Celtrance then checked the tagging and saw it was them. I think this is the first time I've seen Kyouko as the uke but either works for me.

Title is perfect for having a Celtrance manga pop up again.

Haha yess I see that

While I was reading this someone commented on it. This was good read. Started my night off right!

I love how celtrance draws kissing, so passionate

KYOKO WAS SOOOO CUTE WAAAHHHHHH~ this is nice.

doki-doki

The title is so appropriate

Characters taking death so well is...........somewhat disturbing.

I felt that ending.

I like Homuras new weapon.

Characters taking death so well is...........somewhat disturbing.

Well joining Madokami's yuri heaven is kinda nice.

Dear god. Kyouko is too cute for words in this.

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Yes.

Characters taking death so well is...........somewhat disturbing.

Keep in mind Sayaka's been to the afterlife and she knows it's pretty nice. Kyouko seems the sort who'd take it in stride in the first place, but she also knows Sayaka's been there. So to both, it's not that big an issue.

Well if Sayaka can come back once, they can come back again so...

I'm so happy to be reading more of Celtrance's awesome doujins. Glad to know that there's more out there ;w;

Characters taking death so well is...........somewhat disturbing.

Keep in mind Sayaka's been to the afterlife and she knows it's pretty nice. Kyouko seems the sort who'd take it in stride in the first place, but she also knows Sayaka's been there. So to both, it's not that big an issue.

Plus isnt this the realith where they know about the world change AND the countless time Homura went back? So like theyre cool with it cuz theyve already lived so many times and this one they were together instead of becoming witches or dying?? (thats what I thought anyway)

Been meaning to read this on ipad but it wont load'! Damn it!
But heck! It's working fine with my android phone! So yeah! Even with a smaller screen this is definitely perfect!

Why hello there sweetcheeks!

http://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/im_back#20

I find it a little bit odd, but maiden Kyōko is fine too.

Cutest. Kyouko. Ever