I feel like too much happened too fast in the first chapter. Or at least we had too much of an info dump in the first chapter. We're told pretty much straight away about her hobby that she secretly wants to do as a career, her family situation, her childhood friend for four years who suddenly confesses, her new job, how she feels constrained with it all, then whoops asami gets her drunk so she can sleep with her. Then also says that they can cheat even though she hasn't actually responded to her guy friend yet? it all feels way too crammed in
If it was some of these things then it would have a bit better pacing I think. Doesn't help that the MC is super boring. I also kind of hoped that when she had gone round for drinks we didnt have the 'lets have sex now youre drunk jjust push me off if you dont want it' set up. urghh
I reckon there's gonna be angst a'coming!