This was pretty good. A bit darker than the usual yuri work. I like Ayame's expression on pg. 51. Her sullen look was also very cute in general. Thanks to Yuri Project for scanlating it!

That omake was pretty funny. I liked this one-shot, though it seemed a bit rushed at times. I feel like the romance and their blossoming love could have been spread out just a bit more.

At first I was pretty on the fence about whether I really liked it but by the middle and towards the end I was just enjoying how fun and twisty I felt the story had become @o@ what does everyone else think XD?

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good story.. thank you :)

I agree that this story timing kind of jumping a little bit ( the bathing time ). But there was several moment it gets slow down such as the time when the two girls characters make love by the tree. The most thing i like from this story is the ending and the beginning; it has the pick up rhythm that makes the reader want to continue reading and feel the story. Anyone has similar thoughts ?

This would have been a lot better if it wasn't for all the jumping from place to place, which it seemed to do in odd places... Oh well, still a very nice read, and much longer than a lot of other one-shots, too bad it isn't a series, could have drawn out the story quite a bit, added more detail, etc.

Let we all just hope for the mangaka makes a different series that is long and similar to this. :D

at first it seemed that i had already saw that style before, but when gin-chan (!) fall at pag. 10 i remembered the umineko of the other work.
i like the style of this author, in this story the drawing is less clean and detailed, but i can't say is a bad thing,
i'd like to know if this is a later work, or is older than the other

~Love the story~
Even though it could have been done in a much longer story line.

wow this was amazing!!! XD thank you yuri project fro always being awesome!!

The last page kinda reminds me of Hanabira 7.

Need moar S loli on Onee-san.

...goodjob...

It was very good! Nice drawings and it was suprising long!

This was kinda sweet and a little weird. I enjoyed it.

I dismissed this one based on the cover, thinking it was just porn. But your comments made me curious, so I decided to give it a try. Just finished my read. It's not great or whatnot, but it's a cute, nice and a little touching serie. I liked it.

This is a must-read oneshot !! Really amazing :D

I agree with the others; the story is a little hard to follow and jumps from place to place. The story itself is very sweet and very beautiful. If this work had just a bit more polish, it would've been perfect, but as it stands, it's still excellent.

This was pretty good. A bit darker than the usual yuri work. I like Ayame's expression on pg. 51. Her sullen look was also very cute in general. Thanks to Yuri Project for scanlating it!

Cant forgot to mention Wings Of Yuri. they did the translation ^-^

nice drawing, nice story, 70 pages worth to read!

like this story

I really liked this one.

no sequel for Sadism adult ayame?

This was an amazing read. As the author's notes read, a great mix of story and eroticism

Idk what type of Yuri I love anymore.. Or perhaps..... o.o Nooo! It can't be that!

Praise the lord